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this is how we would be
this is what has become of what once was you and me
I pour out my heart
but you don't say a word
but every soft whisper in your heart
I know is heard
when I do hear your voice calling out to me
I turn to run to you
then I know it cannot be
I reach out to touch you
to hold you once again
but you don't reach back
leaving an emptiness within
my hand sweeps across the ground
where you now peacefully sleep
longing for you to reach up and rise from the grave
I gently kiss your name engraved upon the stone
and am left to cry at your gravesite
left to cry alone
I long to know so many answers
as to why you left me without saying goodbye
and what caused you to hurt so badly
that you felt you must die
I wish I could have been there for you
and often think of taking your same route
but then I think of all lifes blessings
all the blessings you did without
I will face all lifes battles without you by my side
I can't help but think if I had fought them
with
would it be you who would of died
I'm sorry I wasn't there for you
but I will never leave you now
I will see you once again
but for now must go on somehow
tears drop from my grieving eyes
as I lay roses at your stone
and left to cry at gravesite left to cry alone [comments] => 3 [counter] => 233 [topic] => 39 [informant] => sweetpeall [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

Alone

Contributed by sweetpeall on Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 06:46:22 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief

Who would of thought
this is how we would be
this is what has become of what once was you and me
I pour out my heart
but you don't say a word
but every soft whisper in your heart
I know is heard
when I do hear your voice calling out to me
I turn to run to you
then I know it cannot be
I reach out to touch you
to hold you once again
but you don't reach back
leaving an emptiness within
my hand sweeps across the ground
where you now peacefully sleep
longing for you to reach up and rise from the grave
I gently kiss your name engraved upon the stone
and am left to cry at your gravesite
left to cry alone
I long to know so many answers
as to why you left me without saying goodbye
and what caused you to hurt so badly
that you felt you must die
I wish I could have been there for you
and often think of taking your same route
but then I think of all lifes blessings
all the blessings you did without
I will face all lifes battles without you by my side
I can't help but think if I had fought them
with
would it be you who would of died
I'm sorry I wasn't there for you
but I will never leave you now
I will see you once again
but for now must go on somehow
tears drop from my grieving eyes
as I lay roses at your stone
and left to cry at gravesite left to cry alone

Copyright © sweetpeall ... [ 2004-01-17 18:46:22]
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Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 02:11:06 AM AEST
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So sad! Oh I feel this pain too. You feel it every day. Your write was nicely dedicated to the one who is gone from you. Alone. Definately a good description of how you feel after someone does that or even just dies. All the best.

Emma.

Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 05:10:46 AM AEST
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this is so touching and definently brings tears. It's so good that u write about this as it might help another soul realize what they do to the one's that r left behind. It should save lives as it's a luving but powerfull write.
luv, huggs,
emy

Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 12:39:18 PM AEST
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This was very sad. I really liked it though. It was a very good and heartfelt write. Very strong and very well worded.

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