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Array ( [sid] => 31839 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lonely [time] => 2004-01-16 13:23:33 [hometext] => this is really stupid poem im not even sure if it is one or is it just a jumble of words? what ya THINK? [bodytext] => im really lonely
im just not fitting in
im in a crowded room
but no one can hear me
im just wasting away
falling over
then being stepped on
i know im loved
i know im wanted
but the pain of being alone still stings
you give me a hug to cheer me up
but this depression always wins
i want to feel like im part of something
like im someone
i want to have a little fun
but i cant for no other reason but im me
i wish i wasn't so lonely [comments] => 3 [counter] => 240 [topic] => 32 [informant] => loopylou [notes] => (Edited by Mod_1 for spelling as requested) [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Lonely

Contributed by loopylou on Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 01:23:33 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

im really lonely
im just not fitting in
im in a crowded room
but no one can hear me
im just wasting away
falling over
then being stepped on
i know im loved
i know im wanted
but the pain of being alone still stings
you give me a hug to cheer me up
but this depression always wins
i want to feel like im part of something
like im someone
i want to have a little fun
but i cant for no other reason but im me
i wish i wasn't so lonely

Copyright © loopylou ... [ 2004-01-16 13:23:33]
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Re: Lonely (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 01:31:36 PM AEST
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No man is an Island. Cheer up things wont always be lonely for you. Just put a smile on your face and say big Hello to the world."Try it it works."Have a good day now from bernard.

Re: Lonely (User Rating: 1 )
by alecfernadez on Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 01:53:00 PM AEST
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this is a good poem, but you should never feel lonley. It ***** you up being lonely, eventually if your lonely for long enough, you build a moat around yourself, and your unable to trust anyone or have friendship. Thats comming from experience. What you gotta do is muster up every thing inside of you, filled with confidence, and just talk to people, because they wont ignore you if you shout loud enough. Dont be lonely, and keep up the great poetry...

***** me I wrote a long comment...

Alec Fernandez

Re: Lonely (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 04:56:47 PM AEST
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Kleenexes beside me, let me say this poem made me cry. Oh how I have felt what was written in your poem. It grabbed me emotionally, I simply loved it.

Kie

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