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A Razor to My Leg
I Love to Soak My Body in the Blood of Grapes
The Sweet Aroma
The Lustrous Taste
It Intoxicates Me with Every Sip I Take
This Buzz Will Last for Hours
Hours upon Days
My Skin Begins to Wrinkle
My Problems Temporarily Delayed

Is this Addiction Bad for Me?
Could Something this Good Lead Me to Believe
That this Bath Tub of Blood
Salvation it Will Bring
Well If this Ain’t Hell
It’s Gonna Be
Cos Heaven Isn’t What it Use to Be

The Lights Are Low Now
I’ve Kissed the Flame
I’ve Succeeded in Making it to Hell Now
The Hands to Hold Me down
Are Damnation and Dismay

Then I Hear Him like a Soft Whisper in My Brain
He Arises Form the Wine
With Liquor in His Eyes
His Piercing They Shine
Ablaze
Like Hell Fire Lakes of Wine

Is this Addiction Bad for Me?
Could Something this Good Lead Me to Believe
That this Bath Tub of Blood
Salvation it Will Bring
Well If this Ain’t Hell
It’s Gonna Be
Cos Heaven Isn’t What it Use to Be

Trapped Here Still
Forgot Who I Use to Be
Lack There of
I Forgot What I Use to Feel
And That as it May Be
The Fact of the Matter Is
My Flesh Is Still Burning

Is this Addiction Bad for Me?
Could Something this Good Lead Me to Believe
That this Bath Tub of Blood
Salvation it Will Bring
Well If this Ain’t Hell
It’s Gonna Be
Cos Heaven Isn’t What it Use to Be

Holding Grudges for the Sinners Who Trespass Against Me
For I Have No Time to Forgive
My Days Are Spent Burning
My Torment
It Shines
Brighter
Than Hell Fire Lakes of Wine
Hell Fire Lakes of Wine
Lakes of Wine [comments] => 5 [counter] => 154 [topic] => 34 [informant] => CrucifiedAndLeft2Die [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )

Lakes of Wine

Contributed by CrucifiedAndLeft2Die on Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 09:00:05 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

I Lie in the Tub
A Razor to My Leg
I Love to Soak My Body in the Blood of Grapes
The Sweet Aroma
The Lustrous Taste
It Intoxicates Me with Every Sip I Take
This Buzz Will Last for Hours
Hours upon Days
My Skin Begins to Wrinkle
My Problems Temporarily Delayed

Is this Addiction Bad for Me?
Could Something this Good Lead Me to Believe
That this Bath Tub of Blood
Salvation it Will Bring
Well If this Ain’t Hell
It’s Gonna Be
Cos Heaven Isn’t What it Use to Be

The Lights Are Low Now
I’ve Kissed the Flame
I’ve Succeeded in Making it to Hell Now
The Hands to Hold Me down
Are Damnation and Dismay

Then I Hear Him like a Soft Whisper in My Brain
He Arises Form the Wine
With Liquor in His Eyes
His Piercing They Shine
Ablaze
Like Hell Fire Lakes of Wine

Is this Addiction Bad for Me?
Could Something this Good Lead Me to Believe
That this Bath Tub of Blood
Salvation it Will Bring
Well If this Ain’t Hell
It’s Gonna Be
Cos Heaven Isn’t What it Use to Be

Trapped Here Still
Forgot Who I Use to Be
Lack There of
I Forgot What I Use to Feel
And That as it May Be
The Fact of the Matter Is
My Flesh Is Still Burning

Is this Addiction Bad for Me?
Could Something this Good Lead Me to Believe
That this Bath Tub of Blood
Salvation it Will Bring
Well If this Ain’t Hell
It’s Gonna Be
Cos Heaven Isn’t What it Use to Be

Holding Grudges for the Sinners Who Trespass Against Me
For I Have No Time to Forgive
My Days Are Spent Burning
My Torment
It Shines
Brighter
Than Hell Fire Lakes of Wine
Hell Fire Lakes of Wine
Lakes of Wine

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Re: Lakes of Wine (User Rating: 1 )
by Jellybellyprincess on Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 04:25:49 PM AEST
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Wow, such an emotional peice. And I see it's your first on the site. It's really well done. Though I must ask, are these your current thoughts and opinions on religion? Or is this just a representation of something else? Just curious. At any rate, it's a truly lovely write. And that ending is great, when the words dwindle down and fade away....... Nice =)

God bless,
Ellen

Re: Lakes of Wine (User Rating: 1 )
by netweight23oz on Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 03:21:13 PM AEST
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this is really good, i liked reading it a lot

Re: Lakes of Wine (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 10:24:57 PM AEST
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Well all i can say is that i have chillies...

Re: Lakes of Wine (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 10:20:41 AM AEST
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Interesting but very good. It was totaly different than pretty much anything I've seen before. I liked it though. Nice write.

Re: Lakes of Wine (User Rating: 1 )
by ArdRi79 on Friday, 6th February 2004 @ 02:14:23 PM AEST
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I love the imagery you used and I relate to the subject I like that it didnt ramble and it subtly drove the point home. very well written and thankyou for sharing.

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