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Array ( [sid] => 31583 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => We All Are Humans (Do We Need To Be Loved Then?) [time] => 2004-01-13 15:50:45 [hometext] => this is what I've written as an impression of peroid of struggle with my chat friend.and that [bodytext] => We All Are Humans (Do We Need To Be Loved Then?)

Am I guilty for your tears
Yes
Coz I've hidden mine...
Were we always enemies
No
So where is the crime?

I don't ask your forgiving
I know I deserve a fine
Since we both were not giving
Eachother a free line

I'll sit it my corner
Let's deny the pride
I am to face border
Of humans' might

I tried to call my liar
I hoped he might have a clue
The guy that you just hire
To smooth troubles for you

At the end I'm alone again
I couldn't have lost more
I don't think it was worth the pain
Trying to beat the score

That's what you and me are made of
Strong words, weak arms and fear
Still staying close, just next door
We're stuck in the same gear

No chance to be together
Neither get separated
Is it just surrender
What we have been rated

Things are the way I made them to be
And I know I've had my choice
I saw just what mattered to me
Too easy to see others as toys

I don't like to be
In a blocked situation
But maybe time has come for me
To stop all my good intention
When all the result
Just brings pain and hurt

Do you wanna change me?
It could be good
But you know
Even you're so low
I just wanna win

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 143 [topic] => 48 [informant] => jeanie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
We All Are Humans (Do We Need To Be Loved Then?)

Contributed by jeanie on Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 03:50:45 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



We All Are Humans (Do We Need To Be Loved Then?)

Am I guilty for your tears
Yes
Coz I've hidden mine...
Were we always enemies
No
So where is the crime?

I don't ask your forgiving
I know I deserve a fine
Since we both were not giving
Eachother a free line

I'll sit it my corner
Let's deny the pride
I am to face border
Of humans' might

I tried to call my liar
I hoped he might have a clue
The guy that you just hire
To smooth troubles for you

At the end I'm alone again
I couldn't have lost more
I don't think it was worth the pain
Trying to beat the score

That's what you and me are made of
Strong words, weak arms and fear
Still staying close, just next door
We're stuck in the same gear

No chance to be together
Neither get separated
Is it just surrender
What we have been rated

Things are the way I made them to be
And I know I've had my choice
I saw just what mattered to me
Too easy to see others as toys

I don't like to be
In a blocked situation
But maybe time has come for me
To stop all my good intention
When all the result
Just brings pain and hurt

Do you wanna change me?
It could be good
But you know
Even you're so low
I just wanna win





Copyright © jeanie ... [ 2004-01-13 15:50:45]
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Re: We All Are Humans (Do We Need To Be Loved Then?) (User Rating: 1 )
by Jellybellyprincess on Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 05:07:46 PM AEST
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There was one stanza in there that I just simple adore. It's just amazing---"That's what you and me are made of.....We're stuck in the same gear." That stanza is just phenomenal.... That one left everything in the dust. Blew it away......

Great job ; )

God bless,
Ellen


Re: We All Are Humans (Do We Need To Be Loved Then?) (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 05:53:39 PM AEST
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This poem was good. It told a story and showed off the emotions very well. I don't think any stanzas blew all the rest away but I think it was a damn good write.




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