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Array ( [sid] => 31576 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The sudden, breath, is your LAST! [time] => 2004-01-13 13:48:13 [hometext] => here's one that i wrote this last night...this may not be happening to me write now,but i keep having dreams about it!i don't know what it means!I DON'T UNDERSTAND IT! do you understand me? [bodytext] => the light gets dimmer,
until it goes black,
the monsters re-appear,
so you don't run, you fight back.

the swelling in your head,
is a tu-ma, behind your eyes,
your body is heavy,
and these words you memorize!

your falling apart,
you don't know where to turn,
you've cut your-self again,
THE FRESH HOLES BURN!

you sit and hold you head,
'coz when you stand up you fall,
you're crying in the dark,
you've had enough of it all.

the knife is still there,
lying next to you,
you don't won't to do it again,
but it's the only way to get through.

so your gripping it now,
so tightly in your grasp,
it comes down soo quick,
the sudden, breath, is your last! [comments] => 4 [counter] => 198 [topic] => 36 [informant] => deathdrop [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

The sudden, breath, is your LAST!

Contributed by deathdrop on Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 01:48:13 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

the light gets dimmer,
until it goes black,
the monsters re-appear,
so you don't run, you fight back.

the swelling in your head,
is a tu-ma, behind your eyes,
your body is heavy,
and these words you memorize!

your falling apart,
you don't know where to turn,
you've cut your-self again,
THE FRESH HOLES BURN!

you sit and hold you head,
'coz when you stand up you fall,
you're crying in the dark,
you've had enough of it all.

the knife is still there,
lying next to you,
you don't won't to do it again,
but it's the only way to get through.

so your gripping it now,
so tightly in your grasp,
it comes down soo quick,
the sudden, breath, is your last!

Copyright © deathdrop ... [ 2004-01-13 13:48:13]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The sudden, breath, is your LAST! (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 03:38:38 PM AEST
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Gosh! This one is really suicidal! Yeah sometimes i have these thoughts as well. Very vivid description! flowing poem, great!

Anne

Re: The sudden, breath, is your LAST! (User Rating: 1 )
by Solmyr1404 on Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 03:41:50 PM AEST
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very dark, very good however.

Re: The sudden, breath, is your LAST! (User Rating: 1 )
by TundraHydra on Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 11:38:02 AM AEST
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nice! great write

Re: The sudden, breath, is your LAST! (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 05:44:43 PM AEST
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Very suicidal and dark. Morbid to boot. Good write.

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