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Array ( [sid] => 31568 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Ravens Kiss [time] => 2004-01-13 12:18:32 [hometext] => Ravens eyes gleam with anger and drip with insanity [bodytext] => I kiss your brow
as I pull you
in to die.
You my love
won't live through
this lonely night.
I'm the one you
always worried about.
Savage loving that
I gave on this night.
Bit your neck harder
than ever before.
My intentions to draw
blood fulfilled by lust.
Sometimes you ran
from me and
sometimes you ran
to me.
Rollin' all night long
you just never knew
that tonight
I'd end your life.
Depression an obsession.
I claim your life.
My own I take
as I gently lay
by your side.
This perfect night
I'd never waste.
This love now
will never die.

The faulty phoenix [comments] => 9 [counter] => 188 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Cobalt [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Ravens Kiss

Contributed by Cobalt on Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 12:18:32 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

I kiss your brow
as I pull you
in to die.
You my love
won't live through
this lonely night.
I'm the one you
always worried about.
Savage loving that
I gave on this night.
Bit your neck harder
than ever before.
My intentions to draw
blood fulfilled by lust.
Sometimes you ran
from me and
sometimes you ran
to me.
Rollin' all night long
you just never knew
that tonight
I'd end your life.
Depression an obsession.
I claim your life.
My own I take
as I gently lay
by your side.
This perfect night
I'd never waste.
This love now
will never die.

The faulty phoenix

Copyright © Cobalt ... [ 2004-01-13 12:18:32]
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Re: Ravens Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by Destiny on Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 12:59:55 PM AEST
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You poems creep me out with how cool they are.*shiver*
It's kind of like with being obsessed with something deadly, it's beautiful in it's own sense and draws you in

Re: Ravens Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 02:34:03 PM AEST
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My god! What a twisted and beautiful poem! Very passionate and in the same time scary! The ending is wonderful! (lol you sound like a vampire.......you aren't....are you? lol Joking) I loved this one!! Great!!

Anne ;)

Re: Ravens Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 06:32:30 PM AEST
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Twisted indeed! I didn't know u had this in u Jeff. I loved this it was great how u said 'this love now will never die.' How chilling was that!

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Ravens Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 02:22:18 AM AEST
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Who can say if this is insane or not ... obsessive love ... together forever ... great write ... Jan

Re: Ravens Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by Fwog on Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 10:15:18 AM AEST
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Wow what wicked imagery, you are indecently so clever.
Great write
Dal

Re: Ravens Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by Kirby on Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 01:54:09 PM AEST
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Hun I really liked this poem! It gave me chills for some reason! Maybe u are just that tallented! Love ya! Love:::Kirby

Great poem!

Re: Ravens Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 03:40:48 PM AEST
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This is awesome! I love it! Very chilling, but somehow satisfying... as weird as that is... :S

~ Moonlit

Re: Ravens Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 12:50:03 PM AEST
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ooo, a very dark love. :) twisted, yes, but I like

Re: Ravens Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 08:34:59 PM AEST
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I read this because my grandaughter's name is Raeven. I thought it might be about something beautiful...oh well. At least her name is spelled differently. I don't care for the dark things...vampirism..gothic love...ugh! But thats a matter of taste I guess. I've read some of your other, lighter stuff and loved it. You are a very good poet no matter the subject..
mary

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