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Array ( [sid] => 30970 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Poem of Heartache [time] => 2004-01-07 09:50:28 [hometext] => This was written by a friend and I after his gf broke up with him..plz comment [bodytext] => She made me laugh
She made me cry
Now she's got no alibi
She made me hurt
She made me ache
Now she's got no heart to take
She used me up
She threw me out
Now my life's in serious doubt
She lied to me
She cried to me
Now she wants it to be fine with me
But she used me
And abused me
So how can it be cool with me?
She took my heart
And with one painful dart
She tore it all apart. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 267 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Puffer [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
A Poem of Heartache

Contributed by Puffer on Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 09:50:28 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



She made me laugh
She made me cry
Now she's got no alibi
She made me hurt
She made me ache
Now she's got no heart to take
She used me up
She threw me out
Now my life's in serious doubt
She lied to me
She cried to me
Now she wants it to be fine with me
But she used me
And abused me
So how can it be cool with me?
She took my heart
And with one painful dart
She tore it all apart.




Copyright © Puffer ... [ 2004-01-07 09:50:28]
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Re: A Poem of Heartache (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 02:39:06 PM AEST
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this is a very emotional felt poem.. its well expressed.. good job

peace and hope
JENNA


Re: A Poem of Heartache (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 10:44:25 PM AEST
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Iread your first poem. They're both great. Hope everything works out for the better.
-Esther


Re: A Poem of Heartache (User Rating: 1 )
by CountryGirl on Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 03:33:49 PM AEST
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Good Expression in this. Tells a reader what happened and the rhyming is great.




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