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Array ( [sid] => 30596 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => StAiN [time] => 2004-01-02 08:14:58 [hometext] => not really a poem - more of a short memoir [bodytext] => You want me to appologise
But for what
For the poem that I wrote
For my opinion that I expressed
Or the anger that I felt
I regret you weren’t the first to know
I regret I wrote it behind your back
But I couldn’t come to you with this.
I explained why in my poem
I told it how I see it.
If I were to speak with you
You would play the role of the victim
You always do
I would be left feeling guilty.
But I am guilty of naught
You would play-down my problem
So it would never ‘compete/compare’ with yours
You always say to me
“At least I have you”
and you know what?
You do, I will always be here
You always say I am your only true friend
And I will try to be always true
But you have never once said
that you will be here for me
you never ask me am I okay
you never want to hear if I’m hurting
would it be asking too much
to know that you care.
Would it.
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StAiN

Contributed by Katie-Kate on Friday, 2nd January 2004 @ 08:14:58 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

You want me to appologise
But for what
For the poem that I wrote
For my opinion that I expressed
Or the anger that I felt
I regret you weren’t the first to know
I regret I wrote it behind your back
But I couldn’t come to you with this.
I explained why in my poem
I told it how I see it.
If I were to speak with you
You would play the role of the victim
You always do
I would be left feeling guilty.
But I am guilty of naught
You would play-down my problem
So it would never ‘compete/compare’ with yours
You always say to me
“At least I have you”
and you know what?
You do, I will always be here
You always say I am your only true friend
And I will try to be always true
But you have never once said
that you will be here for me
you never ask me am I okay
you never want to hear if I’m hurting
would it be asking too much
to know that you care.
Would it.

Copyright © Katie-Kate ... [ 2004-01-02 08:14:58]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: StAiN (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 2nd January 2004 @ 03:33:08 PM AEST
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Very well said.
Soemtimes we jus get caught up in turmoil and can't relate 2 others. I uerstand this explicently.
Great job and good luck.
peace, joy, luv hope, understanding,
emy
good luck in your quest.

Re: StAiN (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 10:54:06 AM AEST
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I liked this. Very good write. Yeah, there are lots of people like that who will play down your problem to make their seem more important. Darn psychic vampires... Lol.

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