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i ride i fly
a tear falls
as i start to cry,
illuminating
the darkness
is a moon so bright
as i wonder
what should i do with my life.

Only feelings of doom
in this empty room
so hollow
don't know
what to do,
everytime that i
let someone inside
they cut me deep
i bleed
i die.

Illuminated by the moon
is this empty space
where there is so much illusion
words could never explain
the confused feelings
i have deep inside
a tear falls
as i start to cry.
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A Tear Falls

Contributed by secretwind on Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 06:55:37 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I sit and sigh
i ride i fly
a tear falls
as i start to cry,
illuminating
the darkness
is a moon so bright
as i wonder
what should i do with my life.

Only feelings of doom
in this empty room
so hollow
don't know
what to do,
everytime that i
let someone inside
they cut me deep
i bleed
i die.

Illuminated by the moon
is this empty space
where there is so much illusion
words could never explain
the confused feelings
i have deep inside
a tear falls
as i start to cry.

Copyright © secretwind ... [ 2003-12-23 06:55:37]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: A Tear Falls (User Rating: 1 )
by Vitreous_Soul on Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 06:59:44 AM AEST
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Very sad poem indeed, but well written all the same. Great title, too.

Truly,
-V.S.

Re: A Tear Falls (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 07:35:44 AM AEST
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words could never explain.......we try though don' t we??? sad write......

Re: A Tear Falls (User Rating: 1 )
by 13Hopes on Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 09:14:17 AM AEST
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This poem is sad and touching, its true, words may never explain fully what we try and say..

Cheers
#13

Re: A Tear Falls (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 12:23:13 PM AEST
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I found your poem incredibly sad. I am fighting tears myself. The poem was great, well written and deeply touching.

Kie

Re: A Tear Falls (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 02:53:23 AM AEST
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this was heartbreaking...

Bobo (Joel)

Re: A Tear Falls (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 08:20:45 AM AEST
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Such a heartfelt poem
Brilliant
Super words

Awe some

Well written
So sad to
Well done

Love Angelxxxxxxx

Re: A Tear Falls (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 12:05:11 AM AEST
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I can certainly can relate to this one.<br /> Sad but good work here.<br /> You almost got a tear or two with this write.<br /> luv, huggs,<br /> emy

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