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twring and swirling

bright stars ahead
is all I can see

Glittery shadows
dancing around me

Whirling and twirling
in the twilight I'm lost

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Lost in Twilight

Contributed by PhantomVampyress on Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 02:05:46 AM in AEST
Topic: fantasy

Lost in the twilight
twring and swirling

bright stars ahead
is all I can see

Glittery shadows
dancing around me

Whirling and twirling
in the twilight I'm lost

JENNA

Copyright © PhantomVampyress ... [ 2003-12-23 02:05:46]
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Re: Lost in Twilight (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 05:18:45 AM AEST
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all i can do is nod and smile.......

Re: Lost in Twilight (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 01:30:53 PM AEST
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What book was that Jenna? I think I can follow this for the most part. Wish you would have made it a little longer though. I really liked it none the less though... I guess like ecstasy never long enough. Hehe. Sorry.

Re: Lost in Twilight (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Sunday, 4th March 2007 @ 09:14:41 AM AEST
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First of all i love the tittle.The peice it's self is magical. Another gem you've managed
to win the heart and soul along with capturing the readers imagination with. Splendid writting.

Ben

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