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Array ( [sid] => 29938 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => i loved you then, i love you now [time] => 2003-12-22 12:30:33 [hometext] => this is my first non-rhyming poem------enjoy! [bodytext] => there's been talk of "love at first sight"
but it didn't apply then, now
you belonged to another the day we met
a close friend of mine at that
we talked, we walked, we went to dances
and i liked you behind her back
she was too envolved to notice though
oh well,
one day
one faithful day
you two were no more
and she came to me in tears
my body was crying with her
but my soul had leaped out of my body
and flew with the birds
i attempted to ask you The Question
but couldn't muster up the courage
so i waited
silently
as you dated other friends of mine
but not me
summer came and went
and again out paths met
(mostly because of all our classes together)
and still i waited
i hate myself for waiting
soon,my friend (your ex) asked you for me
we were the school's new " it " couple
a month our courtship lasted
through your anger problems
and my insecurities
but one day i notice
we were not moving forward or backward
in our relationship
we were not moving at all
so i foolishly broke it off
another reason i hate myself
you moved on
i stayed put
my heart ached so bad
i considered drastic measurements
but i knew i had to stay strong
my heart still aches for you
now you're in another state
as i've said to myself many times
i loved you then
i love you now
eventually i'll get over you
just...
not yet

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 306 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Blaq_rose [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
i loved you then, i love you now

Contributed by Blaq_rose on Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 12:30:33 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



there's been talk of "love at first sight"
but it didn't apply then, now
you belonged to another the day we met
a close friend of mine at that
we talked, we walked, we went to dances
and i liked you behind her back
she was too envolved to notice though
oh well,
one day
one faithful day
you two were no more
and she came to me in tears
my body was crying with her
but my soul had leaped out of my body
and flew with the birds
i attempted to ask you The Question
but couldn't muster up the courage
so i waited
silently
as you dated other friends of mine
but not me
summer came and went
and again out paths met
(mostly because of all our classes together)
and still i waited
i hate myself for waiting
soon,my friend (your ex) asked you for me
we were the school's new " it " couple
a month our courtship lasted
through your anger problems
and my insecurities
but one day i notice
we were not moving forward or backward
in our relationship
we were not moving at all
so i foolishly broke it off
another reason i hate myself
you moved on
i stayed put
my heart ached so bad
i considered drastic measurements
but i knew i had to stay strong
my heart still aches for you
now you're in another state
as i've said to myself many times
i loved you then
i love you now
eventually i'll get over you
just...
not yet





Copyright © Blaq_rose ... [ 2003-12-22 12:30:33]
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Re: i loved you then, i love you now (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 11:09:00 AM AEST
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wow that was great how you had put everythign together like that..made me almost want to cry.lol well i hope your over her now for your sake. good meaningful poem.


Re: i loved you then, i love you now (User Rating: 1 )
by Desi on Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 10:27:17 PM AEST
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This is about Devlin? I think so, Jane get over him! He hurt me, he could hurt you!


Re: i loved you then, i love you now (User Rating: 1 )
by FunkyMonkeyMania on Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 05:38:14 PM AEST
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hello jane. yeager? yes i thought so. devlin hasnt moved so i kno its not him. very good write. i likee a lot. lol, u kno whats funny, the 1st commenter thinks ur a guy. they said "i hope youre over her now" lol, i hope u are not a guy. o no, ive been misled for soooo long! love emily




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