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Array ( [sid] => 29917 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => THE GAME [time] => 2003-12-22 00:29:25 [hometext] => originally a song. about how every time i open up i just get hurt. this is directed to a guy i was with but he screwed me over in the end too. they all the same!!!! [bodytext] => it's been a long time since i was treated right
it seems that getting hurt is the story of my life
i stopped searching for what i could not find
when i thought i had a grip it slipped away every time

because all i've ever done is open up and let go
and all i've ended up with is a broken soul
so i build a wall that no one can break through
i don't join in the game 'cause i don't like to lose.

you know, i'm so fragile, my heart is still on the mend.
sometimes i get frightened it'll get broken again.
but there were times when all i ever did was smile.
i thought that i was loved, but i was only in denial

right now i'm wondering if i'm in too deep
or am i holding my breath just so i can't breathe?

'cause all i've ever done is open up and let go
and all i've ended up with is a broken soul.
so i build a wall so no one can break through
i dont join in the game 'cause i dont like to lose. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 195 [topic] => 31 [informant] => fudge [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => StoryPoetry )
THE GAME

Contributed by fudge on Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 12:29:25 AM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry



it's been a long time since i was treated right
it seems that getting hurt is the story of my life
i stopped searching for what i could not find
when i thought i had a grip it slipped away every time

because all i've ever done is open up and let go
and all i've ended up with is a broken soul
so i build a wall that no one can break through
i don't join in the game 'cause i don't like to lose.

you know, i'm so fragile, my heart is still on the mend.
sometimes i get frightened it'll get broken again.
but there were times when all i ever did was smile.
i thought that i was loved, but i was only in denial

right now i'm wondering if i'm in too deep
or am i holding my breath just so i can't breathe?

'cause all i've ever done is open up and let go
and all i've ended up with is a broken soul.
so i build a wall so no one can break through
i dont join in the game 'cause i dont like to lose.




Copyright © fudge ... [ 2003-12-22 00:29:25]
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Re: THE GAME (User Rating: 1 )
by infedelity_hurts on Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 01:05:51 AM AEST
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i feel sorry for you... alot of guys can be real *****..... i definitely am not.... leading people on and using people and cheating on people is the meanest thing a guy can do.... and i am never going to do any of these... great write... please look at what i just wrote about the conversation me and my now ex had the other night.. see if you can figure out whats happened.. its called 'crimson stains on stainless steel' please tell me what you think.. sorry about whats happened to you.. guys can be dicks... great write.. it really did touch me.. it portrayed what you felt really well.....great work.. keep it up...keep posting...

~jamo~


Re: THE GAME (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 01:39:52 AM AEST
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A really intense write....deeply touching..
Hugs
Jenni


Re: THE GAME (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 03:28:40 AM AEST
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DEEP VERY DEEP......ALL GUYS ARE NOT THE SAME SOME OF US ARE NORMAL....SOME OF US.

THE WIND


Re: THE GAME (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 05:54:13 AM AEST
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Oh wow. I have been searching for a good poem I could relate to and I think I have just foind it. This poem was great and I can relate to it so much. It is absolutely amazing. Great work here, I really enjoyed reading this. I am sorry for your pain. Believe me, I have been there before and know how hard it is. I have to say I agree with the other comments on the fact that not all guys are losers. I havemet a few that are great, namely my sister's boyfriend and a couple of friends of mine. But every guy I have ever gotten close to has just stuffed me up. Thanks for sharing this, I will be on the lookout for more of your stuff.




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