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Array ( [sid] => 29650 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => From one broken heart to another [time] => 2003-12-18 11:03:09 [hometext] => Baby I am so sorry, will you give me another chance? [bodytext] => Last November
It is now a year plus December
Since I fell for him
My heart and soul he did win
But I knew the whole time he did not care
Now I cannot find my heart anywhere
He tortures me
Unknowingly
Pain swirls round in my head
I wish I was dead
So that the thought of him would never
cross my mind
I want to leave it all behind
But my heart foolishly hangs on
I know it is wrong
I am sorry for the pain I have caused you
I am in pain too
All I know is that you did not deserve what I gave to you
What can I do
To make you see
You make me happy
And I would like to have a fresh start
So that I can completely give you my heart

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From one broken heart to another

Contributed by MissLee on Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 11:03:09 AM in AEST
Topic: ApologyPoetry

Last November
It is now a year plus December
Since I fell for him
My heart and soul he did win
But I knew the whole time he did not care
Now I cannot find my heart anywhere
He tortures me
Unknowingly
Pain swirls round in my head
I wish I was dead
So that the thought of him would never
cross my mind
I want to leave it all behind
But my heart foolishly hangs on
I know it is wrong
I am sorry for the pain I have caused you
I am in pain too
All I know is that you did not deserve what I gave to you
What can I do
To make you see
You make me happy
And I would like to have a fresh start
So that I can completely give you my heart

Copyright © MissLee ... [ 2003-12-18 11:03:09]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: From one broken heart to another (User Rating: 1 )
by Sexygirl on Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 11:16:44 AM AEST
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Everyone deserves a second chance and i hope he gives you that...This is well written....He should read this.....and then he will know how you feel...take care....

Re: From one broken heart to another (User Rating: 1 )
by jme on Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 11:40:20 AM AEST
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I hope he gets a chance to read your heart, too.

Re: From one broken heart to another (User Rating: 1 )
by mindancer on Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 03:40:49 PM AEST
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Very nice write hun, its always hard when the person you love isn't with you where you want them to be .. i hope things work out for you

Mindancer

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