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Array ( [sid] => 29563 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I might remember you [time] => 2003-12-17 11:22:20 [hometext] => why do i remember you still? [bodytext] => In solitude
If I sit and think long enough
I might remember you.

I might remember
the way you smiled at me,
for that brief instant
I might see
your radiant face,
I might feel the caress
of your soft tresses on my shoulder.

I may even reach out,
to feel your hand in mine.
Alas,in vain.

I ripped through the pages of the calender
tearing asunder the days, months, years
that will never come
when I will hear your voice again
if only for one last time.
my heart choking at the thought
that I may never see you again.

I clear my head
open my eyes
one last puff on the cigarette,
and in the billowing smoke,
gone is the love
that you never felt for me. [comments] => 7 [counter] => 215 [topic] => 48 [informant] => lalitk [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

I might remember you

Contributed by lalitk on Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 11:22:20 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

In solitude
If I sit and think long enough
I might remember you.

I might remember
the way you smiled at me,
for that brief instant
I might see
your radiant face,
I might feel the caress
of your soft tresses on my shoulder.

I may even reach out,
to feel your hand in mine.
Alas,in vain.

I ripped through the pages of the calender
tearing asunder the days, months, years
that will never come
when I will hear your voice again
if only for one last time.
my heart choking at the thought
that I may never see you again.

I clear my head
open my eyes
one last puff on the cigarette,
and in the billowing smoke,
gone is the love
that you never felt for me.

Copyright © lalitk ... [ 2003-12-17 11:22:20]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I might remember you (User Rating: 1 )
by jme on Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 11:29:39 AM AEST
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Nice poem. Loved your words.

Re: I might remember you (User Rating: 1 )
by MissLee on Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 11:37:58 AM AEST
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Very nice hon, I can really relate to " gone is the love that you never felt for me" and I have ripped up my calendar as well.

Re: I might remember you (User Rating: 1 )
by Aloak on Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 12:07:48 PM AEST
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verry good, i love the way that you caputer missing some one that you loved. i have never felted this my self, but my time will come. good job

Re: I might remember you (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 12:35:57 PM AEST
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a very touching write well done
michelle

Re: I might remember you (User Rating: 1 )
by MissTea on Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 02:27:59 PM AEST
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Brought back many memories of a Love I once felt that was not returned! Beautiful poem for it brings out the beauty of a learnt pain!

Re: I might remember you (User Rating: 1 )
by GoodGirl on Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 06:52:44 PM AEST
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Very beautiful poem. I really enjoyed it.

Re: I might remember you (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 11:02:18 PM AEST
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Very interesting write. I liked it.

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