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Array ( [sid] => 29480 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My friend [time] => 2003-12-16 05:28:25 [hometext] => I wrote this for a friend of mine who likes me alot more than a friend....but my feelings aren't the same for him. I just lost my love and have been so confused as to what i feel...i took sum time out to sort myself out. i hope i don't hurt him [bodytext] => My friend, how you make me smile
We've been friends now for a while
Have you got your feelings confused?
While my own feelings were abused
You're my best friend, is that what you feel?
Not a love for me that can't be real?
Why have you feelings grown like a storm?
while mine stay in the exact same form
Is all my love used up? Gone?
Or is the feeling of friendship not so wrong?
I feel the love for you like a brother
And doubt the love for you like a lover
This time i've spent in solitude
I've realised you i cannot delude
After so recently had my heart torn out
After dieing from the inside out
My friend, you're so nice to me
But friends are all we can ever be
The thought of causing you any sorrow
Hurts me like there's no tomorrow
Simply because you are my bestfriend
Don't let this friendship come to an end
Being my friend means you're still in my heart
And from there its harder for you to depart
Losing my love was so hard to comprehend
I'm glad i had you there, as my friend [comments] => 4 [counter] => 815 [topic] => 16 [informant] => nomie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )
My friend

Contributed by nomie on Tuesday, 16th December 2003 @ 05:28:25 AM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry



My friend, how you make me smile
We've been friends now for a while
Have you got your feelings confused?
While my own feelings were abused
You're my best friend, is that what you feel?
Not a love for me that can't be real?
Why have you feelings grown like a storm?
while mine stay in the exact same form
Is all my love used up? Gone?
Or is the feeling of friendship not so wrong?
I feel the love for you like a brother
And doubt the love for you like a lover
This time i've spent in solitude
I've realised you i cannot delude
After so recently had my heart torn out
After dieing from the inside out
My friend, you're so nice to me
But friends are all we can ever be
The thought of causing you any sorrow
Hurts me like there's no tomorrow
Simply because you are my bestfriend
Don't let this friendship come to an end
Being my friend means you're still in my heart
And from there its harder for you to depart
Losing my love was so hard to comprehend
I'm glad i had you there, as my friend




Copyright © nomie ... [ 2003-12-16 05:28:25]
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Re: My friend (User Rating: 1 )
by Redlantern2051 on Tuesday, 16th December 2003 @ 07:38:19 AM AEST
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It is tough, I've been on both sides of that equation. Nice poem, and I hope you work it out. It might take a little bit of time and space.


Re: My friend (User Rating: 1 )
by jme on Tuesday, 16th December 2003 @ 09:13:41 AM AEST
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I liked your rhyming. Good poem.


Re: My friend (User Rating: 1 )
by Medieval_Enigma on Tuesday, 16th December 2003 @ 10:01:47 AM AEST
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I could relate to this poem a lot..Good poem..


Re: My friend (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 03:35:52 PM AEST
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Very well written.

Kie




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