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Of life itself.

Crimson tearst shed out of hollow caves carved into the pale side of the moon..

Beauty comes in the most painful of forms.

Moments which prove there's something SACRED out there ---break--- under the fists of unexplained anger.

Childlike features that hold in their young flesh years of wisdom gash at each other with the same sharp tongues that destroyed their past.

History repeats itself.

The once tender motherlike spirits reveal their nude bodies--showing off the bruises and cuts that their confused beginning gave them.
They're nothing more than corpses now.

Rotting away.

Eternity ends at the breath of the lover's death-- the last whisper choked deep within his throat.

We remember what we have next to us, but fade away into what we wished we had again.

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Remembrance

Contributed by ForgetMeNot on Monday, 15th December 2003 @ 03:09:26 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Fading veils of attention cover the face of fate.

Of life itself.

Crimson tearst shed out of hollow caves carved into the pale side of the moon..

Beauty comes in the most painful of forms.

Moments which prove there's something SACRED out there ---break--- under the fists of unexplained anger.

Childlike features that hold in their young flesh years of wisdom gash at each other with the same sharp tongues that destroyed their past.

History repeats itself.

The once tender motherlike spirits reveal their nude bodies--showing off the bruises and cuts that their confused beginning gave them.
They're nothing more than corpses now.

Rotting away.

Eternity ends at the breath of the lover's death-- the last whisper choked deep within his throat.

We remember what we have next to us, but fade away into what we wished we had again.

Copyright © ForgetMeNot ... [ 2003-12-15 15:09:26]
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Re: Remembrance (User Rating: 1 )
by jme on Monday, 15th December 2003 @ 03:51:57 PM AEST
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Well written emotions. I enjoyed your words!

Re: Remembrance (User Rating: 1 )
by Asatru on Monday, 15th December 2003 @ 05:33:20 PM AEST
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Nice poem, I run a poetry page for my school newspaper and only wished people around here would submit things this good!

Re: Remembrance (User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on Monday, 15th December 2003 @ 09:26:25 PM AEST
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Excellent use of words...good write.

Emma.

Re: Remembrance (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Tuesday, 16th December 2003 @ 03:08:51 PM AEST
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I figured you would be able to write like this from your one poem. Well done.

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