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How could you?
I loved her
She loved me too, once
You made her change
You made her weak
Something she was not
I watched her wither
Only standing with my mouth gaping
In awe
It wasn't enough, though
You wanted more
You took it too
All she had
All I had too
Taking two souls
All at once
I hate you!

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Dear Cancer:

Contributed by jme on Monday, 15th December 2003 @ 09:07:28 AM in AEST
Topic: Grief

You stole her from me
How could you?
I loved her
She loved me too, once
You made her change
You made her weak
Something she was not
I watched her wither
Only standing with my mouth gaping
In awe
It wasn't enough, though
You wanted more
You took it too
All she had
All I had too
Taking two souls
All at once
I hate you!

Copyright © jme ... [ 2003-12-15 09:07:28]
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Re: Dear Cancer: (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Monday, 15th December 2003 @ 12:24:36 PM AEST
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I can relate to this one. I had to watch my grandfather wither away to a point... I was very young but still remember enough of it to hate all things like that.

Re: Dear Cancer: (User Rating: 1 )
by desertrose on Monday, 15th December 2003 @ 02:15:39 PM AEST
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Cancer took my fathers life when I was 18. This poem described how diabeties Killed my mother two years ago how I watched her suffer. Believe me I know your pain. If you need a friend I'm here. I don't have all the answers but together as friends who knows maybe we can find them :)

Rose
http://www.todays-woman.net
Where friends gather :)

Re: Dear Cancer: (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Monday, 15th December 2003 @ 03:45:44 PM AEST
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Aww.... sad write...
stay strong!

Re: Dear Cancer: (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Monday, 15th December 2003 @ 05:34:49 PM AEST
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Oh, this is a very moving write ... I'm so sorry for your loss ... Jan

Re: Dear Cancer: (User Rating: 1 )
by angelface on Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 11:51:29 AM AEST
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Great write,
if you need anyone to talk to im here , i lost a few people due to cancer and im going thru it now, im here if you need a friend

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