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Array ( [sid] => 29396 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => She loves me now [time] => 2003-12-15 01:46:59 [hometext] => No, I haven't found a new person just yet. I started writing and this came out... Err rather the words began to form in my head and then I started writing. [bodytext] => Gone way too far this time.
Gotten so used to us
laying side by side
held together by
each others eyes we were.

But then

My inspirations turn dry
without your love and hand
here to guide and love me.
Broken heart has bled out,
my salty tears have run dry.
Now I'm walking around
and I can't feel the ground.
Bita, don't you know that day,
well I passed away.
For all that's been said,
and for all the tears shed.
Passing from this place,
always with my hands in my face.

But now.

Please let me go bita,
for she loves me now.
You can see it all
deep within her eyes.
She sings to the wind
about how she loves me.
So please let me go
for she loves me now.
She's my sun and my moon,
and she loves me now,
and I, I love her too.

The book of the faulty phoenix
[comments] => 8 [counter] => 271 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Cobalt [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
She loves me now

Contributed by Cobalt on Monday, 15th December 2003 @ 01:46:59 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



Gone way too far this time.
Gotten so used to us
laying side by side
held together by
each others eyes we were.

But then

My inspirations turn dry
without your love and hand
here to guide and love me.
Broken heart has bled out,
my salty tears have run dry.
Now I'm walking around
and I can't feel the ground.
Bita, don't you know that day,
well I passed away.
For all that's been said,
and for all the tears shed.
Passing from this place,
always with my hands in my face.

But now.

Please let me go bita,
for she loves me now.
You can see it all
deep within her eyes.
She sings to the wind
about how she loves me.
So please let me go
for she loves me now.
She's my sun and my moon,
and she loves me now,
and I, I love her too.

The book of the faulty phoenix




Copyright © Cobalt ... [ 2003-12-15 01:46:59]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: She loves me now (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Monday, 15th December 2003 @ 02:42:14 AM AEST
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"She sings to the wind
about how she loves me.
So please let me go
for she loves me now.
She's my sun and my moon"
..pleasant lines.. venkat


Re: She loves me now (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Monday, 15th December 2003 @ 08:26:14 AM AEST
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This was just from the heart, I felt. I hope you find her and time takes away all that was before.

Kie


Re: She loves me now (User Rating: 1 )
by jme on Monday, 15th December 2003 @ 09:49:21 AM AEST
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You were are beautiful!


Re: She loves me now (User Rating: 1 )
by desertrose on Monday, 15th December 2003 @ 02:33:59 PM AEST
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I'm sorry I"m confused. You have not found a new your hanging on to a past love yet someone new loves you ? I don't want to insult your feelings as this poem is deep and obviously close to you. Just the feelings to those reading it was unclear I'm sorry if you explain the poem I'll view it again :)


Re: She loves me now (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Tuesday, 16th December 2003 @ 12:36:32 PM AEST
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I loved this, but I was confused as to who or what Bita was?
Broken heart has bled out,
my salty tears have run dry.
Loved those 2 lines of course heh.

Bobo (Joel)


Re: She loves me now (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Tuesday, 16th December 2003 @ 12:40:30 PM AEST
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Lol. I was really wondering if anyone would ask about that... Bita was a pet name. Told in German it= baby....


Re: She loves me now (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 01:56:36 PM AEST
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this is beautiful!!


Re: She loves me now (User Rating: 1 )
by carebear on Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 08:50:03 PM AEST
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Wow!!!!




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