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Array ( [sid] => 29364 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lost In This [time] => 2003-12-14 14:52:51 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Rain falls from your fingertips
Blood splatters on the pavement

Lost in a way so lost to ourselves

I need something else than this

The birds fly overhead
Suicidal rock stars, who prefer dead

Lost in a cycle so lost to it's own

We need something more special than this

Cry our eyes until they bleed
Kick ourselves, take what we think we need

Lost in a day so lost to tomorrow

I'll take when I figure out this

Losing all our blank stares
Grace falls as we sleep away our cares

Lost in silence so lost in a whisper

I need more than this

Rain falls from our deadened hands
Sorrow makes it's last stand

Lost in a beautiful touch so lost in you

I know we will have more than this [comments] => 3 [counter] => 343 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Exodus-On-Life [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Lost In This

Contributed by Exodus-On-Life on Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 02:52:51 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Rain falls from your fingertips
Blood splatters on the pavement

Lost in a way so lost to ourselves

I need something else than this

The birds fly overhead
Suicidal rock stars, who prefer dead

Lost in a cycle so lost to it's own

We need something more special than this

Cry our eyes until they bleed
Kick ourselves, take what we think we need

Lost in a day so lost to tomorrow

I'll take when I figure out this

Losing all our blank stares
Grace falls as we sleep away our cares

Lost in silence so lost in a whisper

I need more than this

Rain falls from our deadened hands
Sorrow makes it's last stand

Lost in a beautiful touch so lost in you

I know we will have more than this

Copyright © Exodus-On-Life ... [ 2003-12-14 14:52:51]
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Re: Lost In This (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 04:08:37 PM AEST
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this is a beautiful poem .. I really liked it.. I liked the way it flowed .. awesome write!!

peace joy and hope

JENNA

Re: Lost In This (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 06:52:10 PM AEST
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That's beautiful... I wish I could think of a better word for it. It's awfully sad... but beautifully written.

~ Moonlit

Re: Lost In This (User Rating: 1 )
by Medieval_Enigma on Tuesday, 16th December 2003 @ 10:16:37 AM AEST
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This a very good poem, I like it ......

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