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Array ( [sid] => 29260 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Call from the Hospital [time] => 2003-12-13 00:43:55 [hometext] => [bodytext] => if tomorrow the hospital picked up the phone,
and told me your car was in a wreck,
i would be there soon as the plane landed,
no matter how big the check,

i wouldnt want you to cry one tear,
from your saddened painful eyes,
without me there with you,
vigilant by your side,

sleep would mean nothing,
compared to the chance of seeing you awake,
mountain dew and coffee,
anything and everything it would take,

the friend i never wanted,
was the friend i always needed,
now i pray with you asleep,
with God i constantly pleaded,

Open up your eyes on that bed,
its all i could ask for that night,
to see you look at me one more time,
bring your smile to my sight,

Just as your eyes opened on that bed,
mine did too and i awoke,
only to realize it was a bad dream,
the devils horrid terrible joke,

i rolled over to the sun light,
and saw you laying there,
knew that life would be wonderful,
with you i could always care...
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 239 [topic] => 16 [informant] => That-One-Guy-Nick [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )

Call from the Hospital

Contributed by That-One-Guy-Nick on Saturday, 13th December 2003 @ 12:43:55 AM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

if tomorrow the hospital picked up the phone,
and told me your car was in a wreck,
i would be there soon as the plane landed,
no matter how big the check,

i wouldnt want you to cry one tear,
from your saddened painful eyes,
without me there with you,
vigilant by your side,

sleep would mean nothing,
compared to the chance of seeing you awake,
mountain dew and coffee,
anything and everything it would take,

the friend i never wanted,
was the friend i always needed,
now i pray with you asleep,
with God i constantly pleaded,

Open up your eyes on that bed,
its all i could ask for that night,
to see you look at me one more time,
bring your smile to my sight,

Just as your eyes opened on that bed,
mine did too and i awoke,
only to realize it was a bad dream,
the devils horrid terrible joke,

i rolled over to the sun light,
and saw you laying there,
knew that life would be wonderful,
with you i could always care...

Copyright © That-One-Guy-Nick ... [ 2003-12-13 00:43:55]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Call from the Hospital (User Rating: 1 )
by desertrose on Saturday, 13th December 2003 @ 02:41:28 AM AEST
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This was lovely I know to well what it is like to get that call from the hospital and love life wondering what if tomorrow never comes. Great write

Rose
http://www.todays-woman.net

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