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[sid] => 28973
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => the death of me
[time] => 2003-12-09 08:22:54
[hometext] => man this is one poor quality poem.....ah well......I don't think I did ever feel like this I think it was something i just wrote.....I can't really remember lol
[bodytext] => these haunted hands that took my life the ones that gripped so hard to the knife the ones on which the blood did spill the ones on which helped my mouth swallow the pills my blood sticks to my hands like crimson glue its just another reminder for my eyes I'm dead but my eyes already knew they were the look out for my hands my hands partner in crime my eyes focusing on my wrists as they let themselves be cut with that sharp knife as my eyes watched with not a tear to wipe as my hands were busy killing my wrist were busy laying deadly still as my blood was busy spilling my mouth praises my body for team work gloating it hadn't of worked so well if it hadn't of so cunningly swallowed the pills my acid tears angryly remind my mouth they sacrificed themselves to be water to wash them down my legs laughing how they collasped as I hit the ground how was I suppose to prevent the death of me? when my whole body was working against me? [comments] => 1 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 36 [informant] => loopylou [notes] => spelling checked by mod_6 . 09-12-03 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
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