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Your perfect loving eyes
I know how I’ve hurt you,
And I finally feel remorse

What a horrible feeling,
Of regret I have,
I wish I could take it back,
If only I could.

But no matter how bad I feel,
You still feel worse,
I can’t believe I did this to you,
Can’t imagine you ever doing the same.

And I wonder if I really,
Should have told you the truth,
Is it better to know the horrors,
Or live in the sheltered shadows?

I killed you spirit,
Broke your trust,
Burned down our relationship,
And ***** on the ashes.

Can we ever get past this,
Can you ever forgive,
Could it ever be the same,
Can you love me again? [comments] => 7 [counter] => 345 [topic] => 50 [informant] => hardcoreputa [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ApologyPoetry )

Your Perfect Loving Eyes

Contributed by hardcoreputa on Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 11:06:09 PM in AEST
Topic: ApologyPoetry

I look into your eyes
Your perfect loving eyes
I know how I’ve hurt you,
And I finally feel remorse

What a horrible feeling,
Of regret I have,
I wish I could take it back,
If only I could.

But no matter how bad I feel,
You still feel worse,
I can’t believe I did this to you,
Can’t imagine you ever doing the same.

And I wonder if I really,
Should have told you the truth,
Is it better to know the horrors,
Or live in the sheltered shadows?

I killed you spirit,
Broke your trust,
Burned down our relationship,
And ***** on the ashes.

Can we ever get past this,
Can you ever forgive,
Could it ever be the same,
Can you love me again?

Copyright Â© hardcoreputa ... [ 2003-12-08 23:06:09]
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Re: Your Perfect Loving Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 11:29:39 PM AEST
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Wow..... It is hard to really love or trust the person after that.... Guys kinda think about it and have egos and all that.... Ouch... I don't know what else to say....

Re: Your Perfect Loving Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 11:33:42 PM AEST
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Hi,
You've written a poem that will stand the test of time.
I'm sure plenty of us have done the same one time or the other but it takes real guts to openly admit it.
Hang tuff and I'm sure he'll find forgiveness as it takes time.
Very good writing!
peace, joy, luv, forgiveness,
emy

Re: Your Perfect Loving Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by irshprnss on Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 07:31:45 AM AEST
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This is a great write. Know that people can find forgivenss....but the pain they feel will never go away. So love them extra and hug them more because you will never know when they are in doubt.....but it's then they need you most!
Diana

Re: Your Perfect Loving Eyes (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 07:50:49 AM AEST
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I liked the words, the message rang home, you see I was once also alone. Not having done as the poem goes, I was the one filled with those dreaded woes.

Is not truth a love of sorts, I remembered a truth that cut to the bone, that truth cost me all of my home.

Once it happened, I could never trust, I left my home in such disgust, betrayed and lost I had no more hope, of being with her in that special way. I rememer the love to this very day, and I forgave what she did, and I went on my way. Memories of love in a special way.

Re: Your Perfect Loving Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Fairy on Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 02:01:18 PM AEST
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wow..I REALLY like your work. can't wait to see more.

Jessica

Re: Your Perfect Loving Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 07:15:54 PM AEST
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Dang this was good. I could say it touched me. I can't imagion what you're feeling inside

Re: Your Perfect Loving Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by whiteleo1984 on Thursday, 30th March 2006 @ 04:38:03 AM AEST
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wow, very deep feelings here... wish u the best

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