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[title] => Why do people suicide?
[time] => 2003-12-08 00:51:38
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[bodytext] => i know this poem sucks but i am so sad that i can't put this in any better way.
I wonder why people suicide?
i wonder why people like leaving you in pain
I wonder why people love to make you feel sad?
why are you going
why are you leaving me in such pain
you should know that its your decision now
my life is in your hands now
i think u should know that
if you die
so do i
if you life
i shall live
take this seriously
or you wil be sorry
for what you do
a few weeks from now.
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Why do people suicide?
Contributed by
starcheat
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Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 12:51:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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i know this poem sucks but i am so sad that i can't put this in any better way.
I wonder why people suicide?
i wonder why people like leaving you in pain
I wonder why people love to make you feel sad?
why are you going
why are you leaving me in such pain
you should know that its your decision now
my life is in your hands now
i think u should know that
if you die
so do i
if you life
i shall live
take this seriously
or you wil be sorry
for what you do
a few weeks from now.
Copyright ©
starcheat
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2003-12-08 00:51:38]
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Re: Why do people suicide?
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 01:57:27 AM AEST
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| dearest starcheat, all we can do is be genuine, be there, give hugs n' lotsa love, this is a good poem, keep writing, and warm welcome to ypdc too:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Why do people suicide?
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by mercedes on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 03:14:39 AM AEST
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| Its a good write and welcome to the site. To answer your question of why people committ suicide, i can only tell you my thoughts. Suicide is selfish and the ones who commit it usually dont think of the pain they cause the ones left behind, or as i tend to think, the ones left will get over the pain and be better off without me in the end. To put this in another perspective, isnt it selfish of others to want us to stay just so they will not be left behind? |
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Re: Why do people suicide?
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 04:00:19 AM AEST
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hiya...welcome to the site...since i noe u on a personal level...well...i just wanted 2 say...its about time u posted something lolz...just joking...anywayz...since i know precisely who this refers to, i just wanna say that, in Kylie's eyes, she is doing nothing wrong..she is just a girl trying to escape life...you must plz try to understand her...she thinks that she will not be missed and even if she is, we'd all get over her....she's just a lost soul...i understand your point of view but try to see it through Kylie's eyes ok? Even Kaitlyn would've been a good example had she been alive...altho she ddnt commit suiicide, we both knew her thoughts pretty well i presume....so wat i'm tryin 2 tell ya is dat she is just confused and duznt really want to hurt any1's feelings and it is not in her intentions to "leave any1 behind" ok? hopefully she will change her mind by january 12th 2004...altho i must say she IS stubborn lol...anywayz...great poem afta all that raving...quite passionate too...
I can only please one person per day. This is not your day. Tomorrrow's not looking good either... |
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Re: Why do people suicide?
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by EmSal on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 07:52:15 AM AEST
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Wow - If you die, so do I...Yes! TRUE! TRUE! I have written a poem (Called You left selfishly) about this exact thing about a friend suiciding and that moment I died, he took me with him. He killed my life from him. I was so angry, so confused, so sad but most of all I missed him and wanted him back. It is selfish, but then sometimes I am the one who wants to commit it and see things completely differently. Suicide changes your whole life. Why this happens? Who will really know. A lot of factors, I know the reason why my friend killed himself, but it isn't a good enough one in my opinion...anyway I hope that this person doesn't go through with it. A good write, thanks for sharing this. Take care and all the best.
Emma. |
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Re: Why do people suicide?
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by desertrose on
Monday, 15th December 2003 @ 06:32:55 PM AEST
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Good question Why do people suicide? Good poem to . I guess it is because they are so depressed they feel there is no easy way out they feel though nothing they do matters and they would be forgotten and nothing they do eases the pain . Depression can be a killer in itself. There is a below ground a middle ground and an above ground It making it to middle ground that is hard.
If someone you know has taken their life it was nothing you did and if someone you know is thinking of suicide get them help |
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