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[aid] => mick
[title] => spirits in a motel room
[time] => 2003-12-05 01:04:33
[hometext] => i love her, she loves him, we all die
[bodytext] => a symphonic swan song backlit the moment that i saw your lips touch his the moment that i saw our love die for days i wandered, in stupor wondering when it all went wrong wondering when you had stopped loving me before long, my sorrow turned to rage the pain of loss that i felt turned to a seething fury that scarred my mind before long, my smile returned i caught you together sadly, it was quite easy you barely put forth the effort to cover your tracks i caught you together you, tied to the motel bed he, teasing you with feather, whip, and tongue i, standing at the kicked in door my face showing no emotion but your face said it all he was small and frightened and when the saw the gun he begged like a coward on his knees, pleading for his pathetic life i smiled as i aimed and laughed as the bullet sucked his face into the hole in the front of his skull you screamed, but no one came shouldn't have picked such an "out of the way" motel and people are spineless these days they never came to aid you only called the police and by the time they arrived it was already over i lay next to your subdued form on the bed where your sin was to be renewed i caressed you as you cried whispering soothing words dropping the gun, to prove that i meant no harm i just wanted to keep you true to your vows you said, "til death do us part" and i intended to hold you to that so loving was i that i shared your pain everytime i stabbed you i stabbed myself as well and when eleven holes pock-marked our snuggling torsos i threw the knife aside so that i might hold you as you died i licked your bleeding wounds and kissed you spitting your waning life into your hateful mouth i looked into your dying eyes and whispered, "i love you" your face contorted and you were about to reply when your eyelids fluttered and your head lolled and then you were gone i kissed you softly the way you used to kiss me and lay my head on your breast i smiled weakly and closed my eyes and then i followed you now, our spirits trapped within this room i, eternally chasing you 'round the room you, shrieking with a fear that cannot hope for further death he, cowering in the corner looking small, looking like a frightened child and he will cower forever and you will flee forever and i, i will forever chase you trying to recapture the love that i let slip away in life [comments] => 6 [counter] => 258 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Cancer [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 12 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
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