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Thats all it takes to release a spirit into the air...
But my soul is evil for it dwells in the the night...
My soul will go to brimstone a place of pain and fright...
But I like the pain the blood and the tears...
A slight cut is all it takes for a trickle of blood no more fear...
Love causes pain when its not returned and felt by the other...
It rips out my heart and lungs causing great pain till I smother...
So as I take a drink and ready the blade I think of you one last time...
Tears roll from my eyes down my cheek because I know you could never be mine...

The End.
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Razor Blades and Tequila

Contributed by P0rNStAr on Tuesday, 2nd December 2003 @ 05:13:17 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



Razor blades and tequila make a perfect pair...
Thats all it takes to release a spirit into the air...
But my soul is evil for it dwells in the the night...
My soul will go to brimstone a place of pain and fright...
But I like the pain the blood and the tears...
A slight cut is all it takes for a trickle of blood no more fear...
Love causes pain when its not returned and felt by the other...
It rips out my heart and lungs causing great pain till I smother...
So as I take a drink and ready the blade I think of you one last time...
Tears roll from my eyes down my cheek because I know you could never be mine...

The End.




Copyright © P0rNStAr ... [ 2003-12-02 05:13:17]
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Re: Razor Blades and Tequila (User Rating: 1 )
by PunkD on Tuesday, 2nd December 2003 @ 07:41:13 AM AEST
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always enjoy reading your writes keep it up girl :D


Re: Razor Blades and Tequila (User Rating: 1 )
by CrystalSilence on Tuesday, 2nd December 2003 @ 06:20:48 PM AEST
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Yeah..I like this.
Could be a song with some more added *smiles*
Absolutely love the title and the overall feeling of helplessness and loss for something never really had.
Excellent!
CS


Re: Razor Blades and Tequila (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 08:30:11 AM AEST
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Love causes pain... how true. For some reason those two walk hand in hand.
Great poem. It was written in a way that made it seem as if it were one thought, and not many words.
Take care.
David




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