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Array ( [sid] => 27991 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Fallen (they cry for you) [time] => 2003-11-26 11:32:09 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Did she fall, or was she pushed?
Maybe she jumped.
Or maybe the ground just slowly began to sink,
And left her suspended; no time to think.
Pain, anguish, torment and hate,
The last second in time,
The final memories of life,
As you're about to insert the knife.
Beautiful actress, everyone's star
- How did she manage to fall this far?
Dreams were what she walked with,
Skipping hand in hand with her wishes.
- How did she end up this way?
Thinking no one misses
Her shining eyes and gleaming smile,
When all the while,
They cry for you... [comments] => 4 [counter] => 232 [topic] => 32 [informant] => M [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Fallen (they cry for you)

Contributed by M on Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 11:32:09 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Did she fall, or was she pushed?
Maybe she jumped.
Or maybe the ground just slowly began to sink,
And left her suspended; no time to think.
Pain, anguish, torment and hate,
The last second in time,
The final memories of life,
As you're about to insert the knife.
Beautiful actress, everyone's star
- How did she manage to fall this far?
Dreams were what she walked with,
Skipping hand in hand with her wishes.
- How did she end up this way?
Thinking no one misses
Her shining eyes and gleaming smile,
When all the while,
They cry for you...

Copyright © M ... [ 2003-11-26 11:32:09]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Fallen (they cry for you) (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 02:54:46 PM AEST
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this absolutely brilliant it literally dripped with talent and emotion. Beautiful...

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Fallen (they cry for you) (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 04:59:51 AM AEST
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captivating..venkat

Re: Fallen (they cry for you) (User Rating: 1 )
by Menelaus on Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 07:55:11 AM AEST
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My comments were going to reflect bobo's and venkat's but since they beat me, I can only say that this is in the same vein of Britney Spears' "Isn't She Lonely?" - only more darker and more real.

Re: Fallen (they cry for you) (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 10:11:51 AM AEST
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i've tried commenting on this so many times, but have never let myself press the ok button.. i guess its cos i dont know what to say other than this is beautiful.. im wondering who this was written for, despite knowing how irrelevant it is..
you have so much talent Em..
hoping you'll post more soon..
charxxx

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