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I admired you from a distance, never letting on to how I felt inside.

I thought that I could hide forever, pretending nothing would ever phase me or could hurt my pride.

But then you told me how you felt and all the lies were pushed aside.

We could be together regardless of what the people say, because if anything got in the way of this then there would be hell to pay.

I'll never let anything happen to end this bliss, even if I have to die for this.

If it took my blood to save your life then by god don't spare me the knife because all I think about and all I dream about is being with you and bleeding with you.

Together we can end the lives of all that stand in our way.

Because there is no challenge and there is no obstacle that can keep me away.

If this is what I think it is then save me from demise. Just don't hide anything from me because I can't take the lies.

If i'm the only one that feels this way then I can stand the pain. Just tell me if you love me so I won't die again.

You are an enigma. My enigma. And hopefully we will last. Until fate has torn us apart, or until these feelings have passed. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 314 [topic] => 2 [informant] => demon_of_blood [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Am I a fool?

Contributed by demon_of_blood on Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 04:00:50 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



The first day I saw you is when I had decided, that all of the torture of the past had subsided.

I admired you from a distance, never letting on to how I felt inside.

I thought that I could hide forever, pretending nothing would ever phase me or could hurt my pride.

But then you told me how you felt and all the lies were pushed aside.

We could be together regardless of what the people say, because if anything got in the way of this then there would be hell to pay.

I'll never let anything happen to end this bliss, even if I have to die for this.

If it took my blood to save your life then by god don't spare me the knife because all I think about and all I dream about is being with you and bleeding with you.

Together we can end the lives of all that stand in our way.

Because there is no challenge and there is no obstacle that can keep me away.

If this is what I think it is then save me from demise. Just don't hide anything from me because I can't take the lies.

If i'm the only one that feels this way then I can stand the pain. Just tell me if you love me so I won't die again.

You are an enigma. My enigma. And hopefully we will last. Until fate has torn us apart, or until these feelings have passed.




Copyright © demon_of_blood ... [ 2003-11-25 16:00:50]
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Re: Am I a fool? (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 06:56:25 PM AEST
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wow..........or until these feelings have passed..........


Re: Am I a fool? (User Rating: 1 )
by driping_blood on Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 11:26:17 PM AEST
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i rilly dont know what to put ..... hay i only miss spelling on 2 words ...lol... and one i still dont know how to spell lol (i am going to lick you when you dont expect it too


Re: Am I a fool? (User Rating: 1 )
by Medieval_Enigma on Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 10:44:02 AM AEST
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This poem is FUC*** AWESOME !!! And no your not a fool. I love you StEfOn! Well I just want to let you know that I feel the same way for you. David you can't lick him, stop been a QUEER ha ha...*BITES And LICKS STEFONS NECK* he he *Kisses Stefon and then BITES on his LIP*

LOVE With Blood And Fire
Always LuCY


Re: Am I a fool? (User Rating: 1 )
by SuicidalSon on Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 01:22:08 PM AEST
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If all it takes is for one to die
You have no talent so say goodbye





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