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Everytime I think of you, I will always love you no matter what you do. All the times that we had, I will keep them in the back of my head. As we look at the stars at night, wanting to fly above the sky. As we sit together, we feel the same way. Afraid to kiss, cause of what we might say. When Im with you, I feel like Im dreaming, cause I never loved anyone as much as you. All these lonely nights make me think. I know that Im not as perfect as you might expect. But Im just your average girl.
The girl with a lonely heart, the girl with the lonely soul. And I feel like Im in a bottomless hole. Trying to escape with your love is hard.
But Ill never stop trying to escape that lonely hearted soul in the bottomless hole. My feelings towards you are unexplainable. I wish I could tell you, but the words are just hard to find. As you read this you might know how I feel towards you. No matter what you do, where you go, or what you say. All I want to do is say that, I still love you. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 199 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Twitch06 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Feelings

Contributed by Twitch06 on Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 01:45:20 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Everytime I think of you I always see the twos.
Everytime I think of you, I will always love you no matter what you do. All the times that we had, I will keep them in the back of my head. As we look at the stars at night, wanting to fly above the sky. As we sit together, we feel the same way. Afraid to kiss, cause of what we might say. When Im with you, I feel like Im dreaming, cause I never loved anyone as much as you. All these lonely nights make me think. I know that Im not as perfect as you might expect. But Im just your average girl.
The girl with a lonely heart, the girl with the lonely soul. And I feel like Im in a bottomless hole. Trying to escape with your love is hard.
But Ill never stop trying to escape that lonely hearted soul in the bottomless hole. My feelings towards you are unexplainable. I wish I could tell you, but the words are just hard to find. As you read this you might know how I feel towards you. No matter what you do, where you go, or what you say. All I want to do is say that, I still love you.

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Re: Feelings (User Rating: 1 )
by saphire on Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 02:59:40 PM AEST
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I loved this...you have a great gift for expression!

Re: Feelings (User Rating: 1 )
by Jellybellyprincess on Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 03:28:21 PM AEST
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This is such a sincere writing, twitch.... I could feel some of the emotions through your words. You portrayed the confusion of love perfectly, I think.... especially with "I wish I could tell you, but the words are just hard to find." That just explained it perfectly. It's true though, isn't it? I get all tongue tied a lot =)

Great job, this was a marvelous write.
God bless,
Jellybellyprincess
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Re: Feelings (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 04:37:12 PM AEST
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Re: Feelings (User Rating: 1)
by loopylou on Sunday, November 23 2003 @ 14:07:29 CST
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a loving message that couldnt be expressed in a better way....well done

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Re: Feelings (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 05:19:38 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed this one. Ecspecially the ending. I know the feelings and it conveyed them very well.

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