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Array ( [sid] => 27685 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dawn [time] => 2003-11-22 20:11:15 [hometext] => This is a poem that I wrote for my girlfriend after realizing that after being together 3 years that I havent been fair to her and hurt her alot. My feelings for her made me decide to write this to her to let her know how important she is to me. [bodytext] => Dawn
I met this girl 3 years ago,
She was the highlights in my eye.
I wanted her to be with me,
Until the day I die.

I loved her for who she was,
I loved her for what she did for me.
She has been my perfect girl,
If you knew her, you'd agree.

As time went by, I lost control,
And took it out on her.
I hurt her once, I hurt her twice,
I hurt her more and more.
It wasn't what I meant to do,
My mind has been a blur.

Now that I have hurt her,
I dont know what to do.
I do not want to lose this girl,
But I have made her feel blue.

Now since this has happened,
I have prepared to fix my mind.
I really need to show this girl,
That I can once again be kind.

I don't know why I have been this way,
To a girl I love so much.
I know I really need this girl,
Be able to feel her touch.

Now I have god in my corner,
To help me show the way.
I have to show this girl I love her,
And won't hurt her another day.

Now I don't ask for sorrow,
Even though I weep.
I know that when I go to bed at nite,
Her hurt won't let me sleep.

.I take all my days and think of her,
And regret what I have done.
I feel I have to show this girl,
That the new me has begun

I pray this girl will wait for me,
To see what time will offer her.
For her it will happiness,
A promise I'll keep for sure.

For the girl that I speak of,
A girl thats name is Dawn.
I love you so very much,
And will until I'm gone.

I met this girl 3 years ago,
She is the highlights in my eye.
I still want to be with her,
Until the day I die.

Gerry,
11/19/03 [comments] => 2 [counter] => 189 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Gerry [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Dawn

Contributed by Gerry on Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 08:11:15 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Dawn
I met this girl 3 years ago,
She was the highlights in my eye.
I wanted her to be with me,
Until the day I die.

I loved her for who she was,
I loved her for what she did for me.
She has been my perfect girl,
If you knew her, you'd agree.

As time went by, I lost control,
And took it out on her.
I hurt her once, I hurt her twice,
I hurt her more and more.
It wasn't what I meant to do,
My mind has been a blur.

Now that I have hurt her,
I dont know what to do.
I do not want to lose this girl,
But I have made her feel blue.

Now since this has happened,
I have prepared to fix my mind.
I really need to show this girl,
That I can once again be kind.

I don't know why I have been this way,
To a girl I love so much.
I know I really need this girl,
Be able to feel her touch.

Now I have god in my corner,
To help me show the way.
I have to show this girl I love her,
And won't hurt her another day.

Now I don't ask for sorrow,
Even though I weep.
I know that when I go to bed at nite,
Her hurt won't let me sleep.

.I take all my days and think of her,
And regret what I have done.
I feel I have to show this girl,
That the new me has begun

I pray this girl will wait for me,
To see what time will offer her.
For her it will happiness,
A promise I'll keep for sure.

For the girl that I speak of,
A girl thats name is Dawn.
I love you so very much,
And will until I'm gone.

I met this girl 3 years ago,
She is the highlights in my eye.
I still want to be with her,
Until the day I die.

Gerry,
11/19/03

Copyright © Gerry ... [ 2003-11-22 20:11:15]
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Re: Dawn (User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 03:18:50 AM AEST
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Whoah this is nice...not that you hurt her, but that you care enough to make it right and to show her what she means even if it is a little too late. I have been in the same situation as Dawn but I couldn't go back, but I hope that everything works out for you. This was great thanks for sharing it. All the best now.

Emma.

Re: Dawn (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 02:03:53 PM AEST
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Love is a very fragile thing. But your transparency may repair it.
It may take years

bob

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