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Array ( [sid] => 27674 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => He hurts more [time] => 2003-11-22 18:18:10 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I’ve always thought,
I was the one who felt sad
But after this
I feel so bad
He hurts too
I can’t help him
They broke up
Two months ago
He still loves her
Even though
She feels nothing
She moved on
All her feelings,
Long past gone
He flirts with me
But I can see it
In his eyes,
So should we say,
Our good-byes
I can see
The pain is there

I love the way
He doesn’t care
What people think
But yet he’s sad
I try to help
But there’s nothing
I can do
To move on
That’s up to you
I’ll try to forget
All my feelings
The day we met
At the dance
I always knew
It was a chance
But I thought
It was worth taking
But now my heart
Is really aching
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 358 [topic] => 33 [informant] => 6_2 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SecretLove )
He hurts more

Contributed by 6_2 on Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 06:18:10 PM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove



I’ve always thought,
I was the one who felt sad
But after this
I feel so bad
He hurts too
I can’t help him
They broke up
Two months ago
He still loves her
Even though
She feels nothing
She moved on
All her feelings,
Long past gone
He flirts with me
But I can see it
In his eyes,
So should we say,
Our good-byes
I can see
The pain is there

I love the way
He doesn’t care
What people think
But yet he’s sad
I try to help
But there’s nothing
I can do
To move on
That’s up to you
I’ll try to forget
All my feelings
The day we met
At the dance
I always knew
It was a chance
But I thought
It was worth taking
But now my heart
Is really aching




Copyright © 6_2 ... [ 2003-11-22 18:18:10]
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Re: He hurts more (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 01:45:56 AM AEST
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very well written.. i've been there before myself

great write

Peace and joy

JENNA




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