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Array ( [sid] => 27524 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => How We Forgive [time] => 2003-11-20 12:49:10 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Running, from what you left be hind.
Only rage, left in my mind.
The pain, of what she felt.
The same to you, it will be delt.
A sister, of my team mate.
I send you to Hells gate.
Go and hide, from your fate.
Not now, let you fear in wait.
You wont stand and face your due.
Knowing, i walk silently behind you.
Wondering, what i will do.
The law, does not know where are you.
I know where to look.
I'll repay, the life you took.
In hell, your soul will cook.
If you turn, turn behind.
It is me, me you will find.
No, i will not be kind.
This, is whats in mind.
I see you, yet you see me not.
Here i am, to pay you your lot.
***** you, hear the shot.
You're on the floor, i see you beg.
As i laugh, at the hole in you leg.
Cracking your skull, like i crack an egg.
A broken finger, for every tear she shed.
And the memories, in her parents head.
What is left of you, it will be bled.
I take my blade, cut both cheeks.
I smell your fear, how it reeks.
The life you now lead, live in a chair.
And how you moan, that it's not fair.
Us, we no longer care.
In every mirror that you look.
Reminds you, of what life you took.
Never again, will you walk.
You know, yet not talk.
In my hand, your life i give.
Now you know, that's how we forgive.

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How We Forgive

Contributed by 13Hopes on Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 12:49:10 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Running, from what you left be hind.
Only rage, left in my mind.
The pain, of what she felt.
The same to you, it will be delt.
A sister, of my team mate.
I send you to Hells gate.
Go and hide, from your fate.
Not now, let you fear in wait.
You wont stand and face your due.
Knowing, i walk silently behind you.
Wondering, what i will do.
The law, does not know where are you.
I know where to look.
I'll repay, the life you took.
In hell, your soul will cook.
If you turn, turn behind.
It is me, me you will find.
No, i will not be kind.
This, is whats in mind.
I see you, yet you see me not.
Here i am, to pay you your lot.
***** you, hear the shot.
You're on the floor, i see you beg.
As i laugh, at the hole in you leg.
Cracking your skull, like i crack an egg.
A broken finger, for every tear she shed.
And the memories, in her parents head.
What is left of you, it will be bled.
I take my blade, cut both cheeks.
I smell your fear, how it reeks.
The life you now lead, live in a chair.
And how you moan, that it's not fair.
Us, we no longer care.
In every mirror that you look.
Reminds you, of what life you took.
Never again, will you walk.
You know, yet not talk.
In my hand, your life i give.
Now you know, that's how we forgive.

Copyright © 13Hopes ... [ 2003-11-20 12:49:10]
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Re: How We Forgive (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 12:53:55 PM AEST
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Wow this is some powerful stuff, i really love this poem, its...brilliant, i cant think of any better words at the minute i'm left speechless

Take care...
- Becca

Re: How We Forgive (User Rating: 1 )
by MrWrite on Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 03:14:46 PM AEST
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This is an unbelievably well written poem. I actually felt as if I had gone through this myself. Great work.

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