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Array ( [sid] => 27478 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => In Case You Miss the Razor Blades [time] => 2003-11-19 22:11:08 [hometext] => Who would know that the one person my life seems complete with...my best friend and love of my life, could make me feel so good and bad all the time. Comments are welcome. [bodytext] => Wish I could fix everything.
Plug in my mind and watch me fall.
Dreaming of a better Monday,
But it's Tuesday after all.

Walking through my life,
Feet on razor blades.
Waking up to find blue eyes missing.
My prosper and will for good simply fades.

I miss you so much in my life.
Miss the truth, as small as it was.
The orange and red leaves fall in my eyes.
And fall meets winter, just as it always does.

In case I never told you.
My head is killing me today.
I wish I could send you a letter.
Filled with all the sweet things I have to say.

Tear up all my letters.
Flood your mind with ugly things.
Pretend me the villain.
And all the ugly stuff this villain brings.

Cover my ears.
Crash the window by which I sit.
In case you haven't heard.
This isn't it.

Rip the cord from around my neck.
I'll call myself again in the dark.
In case I never told you.
I'm here to make my mark.

Supposing it's Monday.
And I'm planning my revenge...
All the ugly things I'm supposed to say about you.
This my hatred binge.

In case you never noticed.
I've been waiting for my heart to get better.
The blood flowing from my cut up feet,
And the crimson carpet getting wetter.

Cut my feet upon the razor blades,
I was taken by my boredom.
Sleep upon these razor blades,
I'm finding happy sort of.

The fall is over.
And for all of me I destroy,
In case you didn't know,
This stupid pathetic boy

Flood your mind once again,
Fill it with the cuts from my feet.
I haven't felt a moment of not missing you.
And for those moments I love to hate....

My heart always skips a beat. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 185 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Exodus-On-Life [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

In Case You Miss the Razor Blades

Contributed by Exodus-On-Life on Wednesday, 19th November 2003 @ 10:11:08 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Wish I could fix everything.
Plug in my mind and watch me fall.
Dreaming of a better Monday,
But it's Tuesday after all.

Walking through my life,
Feet on razor blades.
Waking up to find blue eyes missing.
My prosper and will for good simply fades.

I miss you so much in my life.
Miss the truth, as small as it was.
The orange and red leaves fall in my eyes.
And fall meets winter, just as it always does.

In case I never told you.
My head is killing me today.
I wish I could send you a letter.
Filled with all the sweet things I have to say.

Tear up all my letters.
Flood your mind with ugly things.
Pretend me the villain.
And all the ugly stuff this villain brings.

Cover my ears.
Crash the window by which I sit.
In case you haven't heard.
This isn't it.

Rip the cord from around my neck.
I'll call myself again in the dark.
In case I never told you.
I'm here to make my mark.

Supposing it's Monday.
And I'm planning my revenge...
All the ugly things I'm supposed to say about you.
This my hatred binge.

In case you never noticed.
I've been waiting for my heart to get better.
The blood flowing from my cut up feet,
And the crimson carpet getting wetter.

Cut my feet upon the razor blades,
I was taken by my boredom.
Sleep upon these razor blades,
I'm finding happy sort of.

The fall is over.
And for all of me I destroy,
In case you didn't know,
This stupid pathetic boy

Flood your mind once again,
Fill it with the cuts from my feet.
I haven't felt a moment of not missing you.
And for those moments I love to hate....

My heart always skips a beat.

Copyright © Exodus-On-Life ... [ 2003-11-19 22:11:08]
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Re: In Case You Miss the Razor Blades (User Rating: 1 )
by PsychoticDreamz on Wednesday, 19th November 2003 @ 10:27:47 PM AEST
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This is unbelieveably beautiful..The flow of it rolls so easily off the tongue and really impacts one's self..Great write..5 from me

_-Psych-_

Re: In Case You Miss the Razor Blades (User Rating: 1 )
by Eve on Wednesday, 19th November 2003 @ 10:51:08 PM AEST
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Painfully beautiful. Five from me as well. It's got me on the verge of tears already, and I've only read it once. I know I didn't miss the razor blades.

Re: In Case You Miss the Razor Blades (User Rating: 1 )
by Exodus-On-Life on Wednesday, 19th November 2003 @ 10:55:30 PM AEST
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Thanks so much.

Re: In Case You Miss the Razor Blades (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 06:01:15 AM AEST
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this is ace! i really enjoy this sort of poetry.... thank you x x

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