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you may want me
but i could never be with you
i'd never loan my heart to you
because you'd hand it back broken
you are a good friend
but at relationships
you're really bad
because emotion you lack
or maybe you have too much of it and you feel you need to spread it around
i think everybodys felt your love
but nobody wants it more then me
where you are is where i want to be
it's the only place i can't be
i won't let you break my heart
because afterwards it's me
who takes ages recovering the pieces
i want you
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want you,cant have you

Contributed by loopylou on Wednesday, 19th November 2003 @ 04:51:46 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

i want you
you may want me
but i could never be with you
i'd never loan my heart to you
because you'd hand it back broken
you are a good friend
but at relationships
you're really bad
because emotion you lack
or maybe you have too much of it and you feel you need to spread it around
i think everybodys felt your love
but nobody wants it more then me
where you are is where i want to be
it's the only place i can't be
i won't let you break my heart
because afterwards it's me
who takes ages recovering the pieces
i want you
can't have you

Copyright © loopylou ... [ 2003-11-19 04:51:46]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: want you,cant have you (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 19th November 2003 @ 08:30:46 AM AEST
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I fell for a player once, it took me a while to realise what he was like, and when I did a good friend gave me some very good advice - Play the bugger right back again. Give him as good as he gets and don't let him get away with treating you like dirt. This is a very good poem and I hope you take my good friends advice because guys like them don't deserve girls like us. Be strong

(hugs)
Stacey

Re: want you,cant have you (User Rating: 1 )
by mckayla on Wednesday, 19th November 2003 @ 01:04:49 PM AEST
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i know this feeling, except I fell hard my first love. Oh I would do anything for him, but he still needed something other then just me. My heart was to easy for him. He really hurt me treated me bad, so becareful!!! Dont let him fool you! i too used to be highschool friends with him. great write!!

mckayla

Re: want you,cant have you (User Rating: 1 )
by tWiStEd on Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 02:58:35 AM AEST
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they say "you can't have everything"but one thing is for sure... you have taken the risk of loving and falling and now all you have to do is stand up! be happy! live life and never stop loving again!!! nice one gurl...

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