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It rises on the memories
And when darkness so shall fall
Its then your true love will be
Alone with no where to run
You can"t feel or hear or see
Then maybe you will understand
Though not enough, I"m me

When the sun rises on lies
It sets on what can"t be
Left in only darkness
Your only light a memory
Grasping to all unknown
Holding to what you can"t see
Hoping that you understand
I am only me

In the middle of the day
Still will be the sun
Is it the end of nighttime
Or has it just begun
Should I fear what I can see
Or beg for darkness to come
Though unknown to most
To some
All I can be is me
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The Sun Sets on True Love

Contributed by irshprnss on Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 10:11:53 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

When the sun sets on true love
It rises on the memories
And when darkness so shall fall
Its then your true love will be
Alone with no where to run
You can"t feel or hear or see
Then maybe you will understand
Though not enough, I"m me

When the sun rises on lies
It sets on what can"t be
Left in only darkness
Your only light a memory
Grasping to all unknown
Holding to what you can"t see
Hoping that you understand
I am only me

In the middle of the day
Still will be the sun
Is it the end of nighttime
Or has it just begun
Should I fear what I can see
Or beg for darkness to come
Though unknown to most
To some
All I can be is me

Copyright © irshprnss ... [ 2003-11-17 10:11:53]
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Re: The Sun Sets on True Love (User Rating: 1 )
by SkYYBLu on Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 10:23:56 AM AEST
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Excellent poem! I understand how you feel.

Re: The Sun Sets on True Love (User Rating: 1 )
by doug on Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 10:24:48 AM AEST
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this is a great poem , i read it twice and i'll read it again walk in peace and happiness your friend doug

Re: The Sun Sets on True Love (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 10:40:25 AM AEST
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this is wonderful and I understand this more than you will know. Welcome to YPDC Ill be looking for more of your work.
Michelle

Re: The Sun Sets on True Love (User Rating: 1 )
by irshprnss on Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 10:46:49 AM AEST
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Thanks to all who have commented!! I wasn't even going to post this but am very glad I have. So far this poem has got the best responce out of all of those I have posted. Thank You All For Taking The Time To Read It!!!

Diana

Re: The Sun Sets on True Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Cora-Windover on Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 11:09:17 AM AEST
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mm good job, I especially liked the imagery =^..^= ~Cora W.

Re: The Sun Sets on True Love (User Rating: 1 )
by 13Hopes on Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 11:57:31 AM AEST
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A lovely poem to read, it brings many memories of my own...

Good write...

#13

Re: The Sun Sets on True Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 12:33:52 PM AEST
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A beautiful captivating piece of work
Thx for sharing !!

Re: The Sun Sets on True Love (User Rating: 1 )
by twinkletoes on Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 12:52:11 PM AEST
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I LOVE the reoccuring " I'm only me."
How true that is.

A beautiful piece.

Twinkletoes!

Re: The Sun Sets on True Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 01:19:27 PM AEST
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Great write! Best person to be is yourself. Just remember the sun is rising elsewhere and shall rise again upon your face.

Re: The Sun Sets on True Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Lone_er on Friday, 21st November 2003 @ 07:16:51 AM AEST
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A powerful and moving reminder. We can only be who we are. And love is never lost-It just evolves-Great work maam--Russ

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