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Array ( [sid] => 27257 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => can't move on [time] => 2003-11-16 18:22:01 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I'm reaching out for you, but no ones there;
My hand is filled -
With cold, lonely air.
A feeling I've grown acustomed to.
I've tried to move on,
But somewhere along the way;
My heart convinced my mind...
I couldn't live without you,
Now I can't accept your gone.
So every night I pray -
That god will lead you back to me;
And my emptiness will disappear.
Deep down I know,
This is where you belong.
Oneday I'll reach out and you'll be there,
No more lonely nights...
No more empty air. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 326 [topic] => 22 [informant] => harshreality [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

can't move on

Contributed by harshreality on Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 06:22:01 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I'm reaching out for you, but no ones there;
My hand is filled -
With cold, lonely air.
A feeling I've grown acustomed to.
I've tried to move on,
But somewhere along the way;
My heart convinced my mind...
I couldn't live without you,
Now I can't accept your gone.
So every night I pray -
That god will lead you back to me;
And my emptiness will disappear.
Deep down I know,
This is where you belong.
Oneday I'll reach out and you'll be there,
No more lonely nights...
No more empty air.

Copyright © harshreality ... [ 2003-11-16 18:22:01]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: can't move on (User Rating: 1 )
by RealmX on Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 06:33:11 PM AEST
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I think everyone that has ever loved someone can relate to this poem. I surely can. Great write!

Re: can't move on (User Rating: 1 )
by loopylou on Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 07:18:49 AM AEST
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i to cant move on...and i know it sucks.....but time heals as a friend said.......goodwrite......dont bank your hopes on your love returning please

Re: can't move on (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 11:43:15 PM AEST
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Oh how did you know ? I can't move on either...but he won't come back, so what am I doing stalled on this track so another train can hit me?????????

Re: can't move on (User Rating: 1 )
by swiftsouljah on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 12:56:08 PM AEST
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now im tripping how i can read all your poems and be like yeah thats it thats how i feel

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