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Array ( [sid] => 27223 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Loving you in vain [time] => 2003-11-16 11:23:47 [hometext] => I wrote this one for anyone who feels that way [bodytext] => love you so
YOu let me go
just let me chase you
to capture your heart
or even a image of your affection

Dying for you
crying for you
I can't stop to think of myself
It's only you

Your in my dreams
when I reach out for you , you pull away
I scream for you
but my screamings in vain
I cry for you bu my tears are wasted

JENNA [comments] => 3 [counter] => 211 [topic] => 22 [informant] => PhantomVampyress [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Loving you in vain

Contributed by PhantomVampyress on Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 11:23:47 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

love you so
YOu let me go
just let me chase you
to capture your heart
or even a image of your affection

Dying for you
crying for you
I can't stop to think of myself
It's only you

Your in my dreams
when I reach out for you , you pull away
I scream for you
but my screamings in vain
I cry for you bu my tears are wasted

JENNA

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Re: Loving you in vain (User Rating: 1 )
by Cora-Windover on Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 11:54:33 AM AEST
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neat =^..^= I liked it. Hm, needs some editing (capitals, spaces, etc) but overall, good! It was also kinda short... There's just something missing, something that ties it all together.

Re: Loving you in vain (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 18th November 2003 @ 12:17:04 PM AEST
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I understand the poem because I have felt that way a lot of times in my life.

Re: Loving you in vain (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Thursday, 1st March 2007 @ 06:40:47 PM AEST
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Sad isn't it? we've all desired something we could'nt obtain 4 whatever the reason. we r so sure it would want us if only it gave us a chance 2 prove it. A very effectice peice of writting u have here Jenn, it was frustrating me and almost made me scream out, " Give Me A Chance " won't you. lol. as always, intensly interesting your writting is. Nice going.

Ben

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