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[title] => Failure so far.
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[hometext] => This is my very first poem. I am by no stretch of reality a poet. But certain strangulations on my life force me to vent frustration in some manner, so I choose this...
[bodytext] => I close me eyes and the music frees me, in my own world it carries me away. It keeps me sane in my brief existance, but I don't have the means to make it stay. Like a dose of medication, through my veins to break this hatred, hatred for this dedication. Blood and violence in my rhythms, only one thing can break this schism. Find the ones to combine with me, and set set the demons in me free. In the form of entertainment, you all will experience the prophesy. But for this time of failure and pain, I must cope with my errors and try yet again... Because they are out there... somewhere... And wherever you are... I will find you... One man is for certain... But your destiny is searching for you... And when it finds you, you will forever become apart of it... Under one banner, and in the name of our music. Inspite will live again.
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Failure so far.
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Demon_of_blood
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Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 12:12:57 AM in AEST
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I close me eyes and the music frees me, in my own world it carries me away. It keeps me sane in my brief existance, but I don't have the means to make it stay. Like a dose of medication, through my veins to break this hatred, hatred for this dedication. Blood and violence in my rhythms, only one thing can break this schism. Find the ones to combine with me, and set set the demons in me free. In the form of entertainment, you all will experience the prophesy. But for this time of failure and pain, I must cope with my errors and try yet again... Because they are out there... somewhere... And wherever you are... I will find you... One man is for certain... But your destiny is searching for you... And when it finds you, you will forever become apart of it... Under one banner, and in the name of our music. Inspite will live again.
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Re: Failure so far.
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by EmSal on
Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 02:14:51 AM AEST
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Good way of expressing what you feel, and even too through music. This was a good poem I thought whether you are a poet or not you have some potential...glad to see it. All the best.
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Re: Failure so far.
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by sicknivesevered on
Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 11:33:17 PM AEST
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| Beating the living hell out of the drums not enough for you anymore? I'm not complaining though, I rather like your work when you actually take the time to write them. This rings so true, especially the first line. ***** A, good job. |
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Re: Failure so far.
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by Medieval_Enigma on
Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 01:54:37 AM AEST
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| damn no wonder ur poem sucks since its ur first one j/k I like it a lot!!! its AWESOME...*BITES YOUR NECK* I love u stefon. |
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Re: Failure so far.
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by SuicidalSon on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 01:28:49 PM AEST
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Failure so far
Failure forever
You will be no star
Not now or not ever
Drums are your dream
Dreams are not good
The words that you scream
Are not understood
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