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Array ( [sid] => 26193 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Forever lonely [time] => 2003-11-01 06:30:26 [hometext] => Well.. this is my first post so i dont have a clue really of what to put here so just if your on comment good or bad i dont mind its all handy. forever_lonely :) [bodytext] => A whisper in the cold harsh wind
A footstep on the purple dew
My heart follows sweet long nothings
following my mind in few

A tremor of my hand upon your brittle face
Lost fingers in your hair
I remember your soft touch of silk
I remember everything so fair

Emotions are so passionate
Lost in a deep sea breeze
When will we be back togther
Forever lonely with such ease

Fallen leaves upon a cloudless lullaby
Wishes of candy dreams so long ago
I loved you with a heart so strong
I loved you with a heart so low

My candy dreams, your cloudless lullaby
So far away, nowhere to come
Ill make you a promise of romance untold
Forever lonely all and one [comments] => 8 [counter] => 219 [topic] => 22 [informant] => forever_lonely [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 21 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Forever lonely

Contributed by forever_lonely on Saturday, 1st November 2003 @ 06:30:26 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

A whisper in the cold harsh wind
A footstep on the purple dew
My heart follows sweet long nothings
following my mind in few

A tremor of my hand upon your brittle face
Lost fingers in your hair
I remember your soft touch of silk
I remember everything so fair

Emotions are so passionate
Lost in a deep sea breeze
When will we be back togther
Forever lonely with such ease

Fallen leaves upon a cloudless lullaby
Wishes of candy dreams so long ago
I loved you with a heart so strong
I loved you with a heart so low

My candy dreams, your cloudless lullaby
So far away, nowhere to come
Ill make you a promise of romance untold
Forever lonely all and one

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Re: Forever lonely (User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygodslove on Saturday, 1st November 2003 @ 06:53:22 AM AEST
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welcome to the site.....
beautiful beautiful write..thanks for making me smile..be looking forward to more of your writes...........sandy

Re: Forever lonely (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Saturday, 1st November 2003 @ 08:53:22 AM AEST
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Welcome Welcome!! Come in,grab a drink,put your feet up and get ready to be entertained,challenged,pm'd,laughing your toosh off,and hugged too.
So happy you could join us *smiles*
This is a most pretty write.Its really dreamy and light.Nice work!!
Hey has anyone seen the remote??,,I bet Larry took it with him..just to have last say ;) lol.(dont mind me..just messin round"
Hope you enjoy your time here..Keep up the great work.
Sharon

Re: Forever lonely (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Saturday, 1st November 2003 @ 02:09:02 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC, the best poetry site on the net!! This is a lovely poem and I look forward to reading lots more of your work.
Jenni

Re: Forever lonely (User Rating: 1 )
by Baronhawk on Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 02:23:29 PM AEST
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Ahh...the ever popular longings for a lost love. Quite a nice poem I would say...though being only an amateur poet myself my opinions could be suspect. Though I wonder what your message is in here. Being the negative person that I am I would say that you are damning yourself to be forever lonely....because of lost love...or is this a promise to your lost love that you are going to find or win it again? Maybe this would be a good ting to explain in the header.

Re: Forever lonely (User Rating: 1 )
by Jellybellyprincess on Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 07:01:43 PM AEST
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Wow, a fantastic first write =) Welcome ; )
First off I'd like to say that this is a touching peice of writing, it really is. It hurt me a bit while reading it, because you portrayed it well enough that I could feel the pain too. Very well done.
I hope days get brighter =)
God bless,
Jellybellyprincess

Re: Forever lonely (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 05:52:15 PM AEST
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What a great poem, you have a massive talent for these buddy! Im proud to have grown up with you as my best friend, weve been through a lot!
Jim

Re: Forever lonely (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Friday, 2nd January 2004 @ 03:44:00 PM AEST
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very well written

Shari

Re: Forever lonely (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 06:35:40 PM AEST
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Oh so bitter sweet!!!!! Wow very well written and the words are really touching!!!!! It has the touch of a master! Keep it up!
Anne :D

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