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Array ( [sid] => 26150 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => unwanted by parents but loved by uncle fady [time] => 2003-10-31 13:01:51 [hometext] => THIS IS NOT ABOUT ME BUT A FRIEND I HAVE SUMMED UP HER FEELINGS IN POETRY..HER PARENTS LEFT HER WHEN SHE WAS BORN SHE WAS BROUGHT UP BY AN UNCLE WHO SHE TREATED BAD AND AS SOON AS HE DIED SHE REALIZED WHAT HE MEANT TO HER.. [bodytext] => Mistake I was to you and daddy but you had no right to give me away to uncle fady
You didnt see me once or ever write I ask you parents what was the great fright?
I thought of you every day kissed you good night and started to play.
Play I did with you and dad you were my friends and the rest were bad.
Every time uncle fady tucked me in at night I turned a away with great despite.
Even though it was never his fault I blamed him for your wrong.

Every time i said to him ' i want my daddy' he smiled and said ' I am your daddy'
and when i asked for mummy YOU, he kissed me on the cheek saying ' I am your mummy'
I felt angry, I felt scared I called fady names which made me feel sad.
Then in school it was parents evening fady came looking all big and bad.
When the kids called him names i shouted out ' he's not my daddy he's a big fat shame'
Fady cried and ran away my teacher said i was the one who was a shame.

On Christmas Eve you both were here again in my heart giving me cookies and cream. I hugged you tight and whispered slowly ' I love you both don't leave me lonely'
Then fady came with a big present i spoke to him like he was some peasent ..
I want my parents i asked again he said ' sorry darling they're both away'
I spat on the floor saying to him thats what he was , he looked in my eyes with love and affection.

On christmas day came a call saying fady was in hospital ready to die.
my heart stopped, my heart cried I realized I was living a lie.
Rushed I did to the hospital and there i saw fady in his death bed saying 'come honey next to your daddy'
Fady fady why did you do this i cried...cos of you honey you wanted me out of your precious life...
No NO i was just mad I wanted my parents thats all i was mad ..

Im sorry honey, it's to late im dying but i still love you..
Noo fady please dont go my life will be silent without you.
‘Find your parents' i hate to say they will be here to guide you your way..
My parents i say where are they?
In America enjoying there life they have millions now without a price..
Why did they leave me you said they were ill whats the story behind this bill?
'Im sorry hun its all like this they didn't want you hearing this I felt cold I felt sad I guess this was the end and it was my bad...

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 255 [topic] => 43 [informant] => M2003UK [notes] => (edited by Mod_7 for spelling.) [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
unwanted by parents but loved by uncle fady

Contributed by M2003UK on Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 01:01:51 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



Mistake I was to you and daddy but you had no right to give me away to uncle fady
You didnt see me once or ever write I ask you parents what was the great fright?
I thought of you every day kissed you good night and started to play.
Play I did with you and dad you were my friends and the rest were bad.
Every time uncle fady tucked me in at night I turned a away with great despite.
Even though it was never his fault I blamed him for your wrong.

Every time i said to him ' i want my daddy' he smiled and said ' I am your daddy'
and when i asked for mummy YOU, he kissed me on the cheek saying ' I am your mummy'
I felt angry, I felt scared I called fady names which made me feel sad.
Then in school it was parents evening fady came looking all big and bad.
When the kids called him names i shouted out ' he's not my daddy he's a big fat shame'
Fady cried and ran away my teacher said i was the one who was a shame.

On Christmas Eve you both were here again in my heart giving me cookies and cream. I hugged you tight and whispered slowly ' I love you both don't leave me lonely'
Then fady came with a big present i spoke to him like he was some peasent ..
I want my parents i asked again he said ' sorry darling they're both away'
I spat on the floor saying to him thats what he was , he looked in my eyes with love and affection.

On christmas day came a call saying fady was in hospital ready to die.
my heart stopped, my heart cried I realized I was living a lie.
Rushed I did to the hospital and there i saw fady in his death bed saying 'come honey next to your daddy'
Fady fady why did you do this i cried...cos of you honey you wanted me out of your precious life...
No NO i was just mad I wanted my parents thats all i was mad ..

Im sorry honey, it's to late im dying but i still love you..
Noo fady please dont go my life will be silent without you.
‘Find your parents' i hate to say they will be here to guide you your way..
My parents i say where are they?
In America enjoying there life they have millions now without a price..
Why did they leave me you said they were ill whats the story behind this bill?
'Im sorry hun its all like this they didn't want you hearing this I felt cold I felt sad I guess this was the end and it was my bad...





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Re: unwanted by parents but loved by uncle fady (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 01:23:25 PM AEST
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Wow.


Re: unwanted by parents but loved by uncle fady (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 3rd November 2003 @ 09:22:04 AM AEST
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hmm interesting l liked it...very honest..somtimes tru feelings dont ryhme.. well done


Re: unwanted by parents but loved by uncle fady (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 08:59:09 AM AEST
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this is full of feelings...




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