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Array ( [sid] => 25898 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => UNINVITED GUESTS [time] => 2003-10-27 21:59:29 [hometext] => This poem means a lot to me and it was written for my husband. At the time, he was going through something so stressful and unbelievable, brought on by strangers who don't know him and who don't choose to find out the truth about him, to this day. [bodytext] => Through the tears and through the pain
In a daze pushing yourself
Stumbling along, against the odds
Like a house of cards, unbalanced

I know beyond doubt, so firmly remain...

While this grip of hands invisible
Torture our heart and soul
Trying slowly to dim the glow
From the door at the end of our passage

A hazy black out spell, unspeakable...

I hear hushed and crazy words
Spoken from lips of guests uninvited
Barely able to comprehend - all unkind
Followed by your anguished heart

bleeding, and you pleading needlessly...

Don't let this dark realm close in
Erase the visions and choose to forget
Tightly hold on to faith,
If you need, lean on me for all to see

how can the good not be evident within....

~ Robbie ~

Copyright ©2003 Robbie B
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 156 [topic] => 48 [informant] => robbieb [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
UNINVITED GUESTS

Contributed by robbieb on Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 09:59:29 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Through the tears and through the pain
In a daze pushing yourself
Stumbling along, against the odds
Like a house of cards, unbalanced

I know beyond doubt, so firmly remain...

While this grip of hands invisible
Torture our heart and soul
Trying slowly to dim the glow
From the door at the end of our passage

A hazy black out spell, unspeakable...

I hear hushed and crazy words
Spoken from lips of guests uninvited
Barely able to comprehend - all unkind
Followed by your anguished heart

bleeding, and you pleading needlessly...

Don't let this dark realm close in
Erase the visions and choose to forget
Tightly hold on to faith,
If you need, lean on me for all to see

how can the good not be evident within....

~ Robbie ~

Copyright ©2003 Robbie B




Copyright © robbieb ... [ 2003-10-27 21:59:29]
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Re: UNINVITED GUESTS (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 06:13:30 AM AEST
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A very heartfelt and moving write .... I can relate to this so well, with an episode in my family's life ... I wish you well ... Jan


Re: UNINVITED GUESTS (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 02:35:41 PM AEST
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very good write, it has me guessing. Crow




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