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My heart just feels sore.

I felt my heart rip.
Like it got stabbed with a knife tip.

I will never be the same.
I dont seek fame

I just want a woman's love
so that I can soar above

the sky is never bright
I need a little light.

Happiness is what I would like to see
but that I will probably never be. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 178 [topic] => 22 [informant] => brokenheartedfool [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Lost Love

Contributed by brokenheartedfool on Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 08:09:59 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

She says she doesn't love me any more.
My heart just feels sore.

I felt my heart rip.
Like it got stabbed with a knife tip.

I will never be the same.
I dont seek fame

I just want a woman's love
so that I can soar above

the sky is never bright
I need a little light.

Happiness is what I would like to see
but that I will probably never be.

Copyright © brokenheartedfool ... [ 2003-10-26 20:09:59]
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Re: Lost Love (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 08:14:36 PM AEST
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whoa. thats really good. i loved it.

Re: Lost Love (User Rating: 1 )
by robbieb on Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 08:48:30 PM AEST
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Keep remembering, everything happens for a reason. Your happiness will come. I liked your emotion in this. It was very open. Thank You.

Re: Lost Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Stalkee on Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 10:01:47 PM AEST
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good job on this, I'm in your boat right now...thinking I won't really truly be happy. but we need not to worry...we'll both find what we're looking for eventually...we just need to give it time. again, great job!

Re: Lost Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Jacquelynne on Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 10:02:53 AM AEST
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i liked this one. good write.

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