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Soft and so soft that sensitivity is an understatement
I drink it full of sugar, frothy and hot

Speak to me gods
Send me a sign
Tell me I’m worth it
And all of this that is simple and mine
Is truly and rightly so

Forever is a tragedy
Wishing that life were a movie
Symbiotic, stationary galloping from my heart
There is only a whisper of that here

Warm me up from the inside out
Heal my head and fix my scars
Toe up I am bound to a spool and it’s thin but, choking.

Roaring plains speak to me now
Get up girl
Come dance in the rain
Get up girl
Come dance in the plain
Does sweep and speak to me now.
How I want to
But, I won’t nor will I even try
Leave me here to die
Call out no more
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Not Simple Dreams

Contributed by alisialynn on Saturday, 25th October 2003 @ 10:29:26 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Roaring plains that whisper to brains
Soft and so soft that sensitivity is an understatement
I drink it full of sugar, frothy and hot

Speak to me gods
Send me a sign
Tell me I’m worth it
And all of this that is simple and mine
Is truly and rightly so

Forever is a tragedy
Wishing that life were a movie
Symbiotic, stationary galloping from my heart
There is only a whisper of that here

Warm me up from the inside out
Heal my head and fix my scars
Toe up I am bound to a spool and it’s thin but, choking.

Roaring plains speak to me now
Get up girl
Come dance in the rain
Get up girl
Come dance in the plain
Does sweep and speak to me now.
How I want to
But, I won’t nor will I even try
Leave me here to die
Call out no more

Copyright Â© alisialynn ... [ 2003-10-25 22:29:26]
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Re: Not Simple Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 02:49:57 AM AEST
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dearest alisialynn, this is beautiful, love your use of lines, thoughts and reality, hope alls well with you, hugs n' love nessa

Re: Not Simple Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Ldy_Tryst_Vampyrre on Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 10:38:48 PM AEST
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there is something about this poem that made me want to keep reading it to the ending...i love your use of words and the way you have put such thoughts together that i would think of....you present your emotions well...keep on writing!!!
blessed be!!
--from the shadows

Re: Not Simple Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 17th November 2006 @ 05:12:37 PM AEST
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This is a very good poem. Keep up the good work!

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