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Array ( [sid] => 25136 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Helpless [time] => 2003-10-16 04:34:54 [hometext] => Hmmmmm....... Things start goin well and then ur hit with a double whammy........ [bodytext] => I felt alive again,
But I paid the price for that joy.
A day in the hospital,
Five thousand pills I cant keep down.

Why am I so weak,
So completely helpless,
That I cant even stand on my own.

Take it easy they say,
You only have so much time left.
What good is this time,
If I cant be free to live??

I thought things were better,
Soon, I thought,
My life would be great.

Apparently thats not so,
But who cares anyway??
Who wants to live,
Who wants to be free?? [comments] => 5 [counter] => 178 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Kalika [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Helpless

Contributed by Kalika on Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 04:34:54 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I felt alive again,
But I paid the price for that joy.
A day in the hospital,
Five thousand pills I cant keep down.

Why am I so weak,
So completely helpless,
That I cant even stand on my own.

Take it easy they say,
You only have so much time left.
What good is this time,
If I cant be free to live??

I thought things were better,
Soon, I thought,
My life would be great.

Apparently thats not so,
But who cares anyway??
Who wants to live,
Who wants to be free??

Copyright © Kalika ... [ 2003-10-16 04:34:54]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Helpless (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 05:04:57 AM AEST
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Oh..it is heart breaking...Kalika....you will definitely stand on your own..don't give up your hope.blessings my child..venkat

Re: Helpless (User Rating: 1 )
by TearS on Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 06:28:38 AM AEST
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!It's really nice and wonderful!!!

Re: Helpless (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 11:54:56 AM AEST
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i see such strength in your work!!!!!!!! great job!!!

Re: Helpless (User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 02:54:56 AM AEST
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Hey we care Kal, it might take awhile but soon you will be writing about the PAST experience...and you will be free...anyway all the best and take care. Great write.

Emma.

Re: Helpless (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 03:09:36 AM AEST
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Wow....this is simplistic but heartbreakingly sad. I sense anger here...please keep your chin up and one day you will be revelling in your freedom and life.

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