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Time Lost
Contributed by
garyh
on
Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 12:59:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Wasting a lifetime
Trying to find love
Nothing happens
No hope, no girl
Suddenly see her
But ten years before
Cant do anything
Used to be friends, nothing more
Now realized affection
Can go no further
Lost a lifetime
And lost desire
Try to forget
But cant
Try to die
But dont
Mind suddenly gone
No end is near
Nothing to do now
But go on
Copyright ©
garyh
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2003-10-16 00:59:28]
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Re: Time Lost
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jellybellyprincess on
Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 09:35:21 AM AEST
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Sometimes our priorities are in something that they shouldn't have been in. You spend a lifetime trying to reach that goal, and then you see the error of your ways too late. It reminds me of a short story- "Contents of the Dead Man's Pockets" by Jack Finney. It's a short story thats meaning is parallel to your poem, but the main character's priorities are in acheiving wealth, not love. But anyways, I think you might find that interesting. Great write, I enjoyed it.
Love Joy and Peace,
JBP |
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Re: Time Lost
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 12:25:44 PM AEST
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| i've been that girl before.....he was honest and told me he was kicking himself in the arse.......sorry for his missed opportunity.....it was very endearing........it'll be okay.......great write!!!!!!!! |
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