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we should be holding each other tight
alas, life has made us deal with this
whilst we're longing simply a sweet kiss,

im far away from he to which i belong
and all these days are long and longgg...
the sun shines on him and flowers bloom
when im alone dreaming within my room,

whilst here the trees they turn all colours
and fragrant spring to him is now restored
these stars then go visit him and leave me
another long day comes to be with me,

how sad to be away from him over here
to emphasize i look out and see a lone deer
walking across the pastures in peace outside
oh, beautiful deer, in you, may i confide?

im far away from he to which i belong
and all these days are long and longgg...
it seems forever 'til im again in his arms
but i know too, he misses my charms,

the bright of day and dark of nights
we should be holding each other tight
alas, life has made us deal with this
whilst we're awaiting a simply sweet kiss.


*ø,¸¸,ø*°´love°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´x°*ø,¸¸,ø*°you´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*




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a simply sweet kiss

Contributed by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 11:42:01 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



the bright of day and dark of nights
we should be holding each other tight
alas, life has made us deal with this
whilst we're longing simply a sweet kiss,

im far away from he to which i belong
and all these days are long and longgg...
the sun shines on him and flowers bloom
when im alone dreaming within my room,

whilst here the trees they turn all colours
and fragrant spring to him is now restored
these stars then go visit him and leave me
another long day comes to be with me,

how sad to be away from him over here
to emphasize i look out and see a lone deer
walking across the pastures in peace outside
oh, beautiful deer, in you, may i confide?

im far away from he to which i belong
and all these days are long and longgg...
it seems forever 'til im again in his arms
but i know too, he misses my charms,

the bright of day and dark of nights
we should be holding each other tight
alas, life has made us deal with this
whilst we're awaiting a simply sweet kiss.


*ø,¸¸,ø*°´love°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´x°*ø,¸¸,ø*°you´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*








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Re: a simply sweet kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by Bongo on Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 12:09:24 PM AEST
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Yes, that simple sweet kiss needs some assistance
It would be planted right now
If it were not for the distance
To struddle that puddle, tell me how
To kiss at this moment lacks touch at this instant
But when finally together...Wow.


Re: a simply sweet kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by Putteragain on Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 01:40:45 PM AEST
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your poems always move me
such sweet love and the comment
makes it even sweeter
i got a huge cavity reading this
I LOVE IT

Putter


Re: a simply sweet kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 02:23:19 PM AEST
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oh so beautiful like a swan
I wish I had a fairies wand
So across the space
I could help you race

Hugs
Shari


Re: a simply sweet kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 05:17:08 PM AEST
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Beautiful and sweet as always, Nessa. I wish you all the happiness in the world!!... just as long as you leave a little for the rest of us, LOL. :P

~ Dee


Re: a simply sweet kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 05:50:22 PM AEST
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The ache of love ... so beautiful .. Jan


Re: a simply sweet kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 07:49:11 PM AEST
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beautiful, I wish you every good thing. Crow


Re: a simply sweet kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 04:06:47 AM AEST
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wow!! sweet romantic poem..simply superb. very, very beautiful.. hmmm..good luck ! venkat


Re: a simply sweet kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by norm on Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 09:35:13 AM AEST
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To really understand the sites
I must digest what Bongo writes
For One and One does add to Two
If it's not so then you are blue..



Re: a simply sweet kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 07:37:57 PM AEST
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Such a lovely and touching write. Loved it!
Saira


Re: a simply sweet kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on Tuesday, 21st October 2003 @ 06:12:44 PM AEST
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hi ladyfawn,
oh how sweet these words sound in the ear.you make me want to kiss a lady.
you sure express your self well from the heart.i hope he knows he have a diamond already.


Re: a simply sweet kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by Merry on Friday, 24th October 2003 @ 02:47:07 PM AEST
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a very sweet kiss to be sure when at last you are together again - may it be soon


un beso
merry




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