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Array ( [sid] => 25067 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Broken Love [time] => 2003-10-15 03:50:11 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Broken Love

I wish I could go back in time
The time when you loved me
All I thought about was you
And all you used to say was we

Its time to see that this is over
Hard to believe this time would ever come
But reality shows me its time to move on
Now memories only to remember-everything gone

My heart aches and I feel like I cant breathe
I would do anything to have you here with me
But your mistake led this fantasy to end
I knew it wasnt real-all pretend

I guess I just get caught up
In little love spells
Didnt realize who you were
Your charm of course, made it hard to tell

Everything I thought was perfect
Every smile from my heart
Never would have thought
You would rip my world apart

Love is sometimes a joke
Never get too caught up
Before you can even think
You?ll hit a little bump

That bump will turn to jagged rocks
Until your jumping over them all
Youll trip over a couple
Then before you know it yo?ll fall

Itll be over and your dreams will die
Only to remember things behind the lies
Time to start over and try someone new
Wait for another dream to come true
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Broken Love

Contributed by Amora on Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 03:50:11 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Broken Love

I wish I could go back in time
The time when you loved me
All I thought about was you
And all you used to say was we

Its time to see that this is over
Hard to believe this time would ever come
But reality shows me its time to move on
Now memories only to remember-everything gone

My heart aches and I feel like I cant breathe
I would do anything to have you here with me
But your mistake led this fantasy to end
I knew it wasnt real-all pretend

I guess I just get caught up
In little love spells
Didnt realize who you were
Your charm of course, made it hard to tell

Everything I thought was perfect
Every smile from my heart
Never would have thought
You would rip my world apart

Love is sometimes a joke
Never get too caught up
Before you can even think
You?ll hit a little bump

That bump will turn to jagged rocks
Until your jumping over them all
Youll trip over a couple
Then before you know it yo?ll fall

Itll be over and your dreams will die
Only to remember things behind the lies
Time to start over and try someone new
Wait for another dream to come true




Copyright © Amora ... [ 2003-10-15 03:50:11]
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Re: Broken Love (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 04:18:55 AM AEST
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Nice wording..expression is good..Good write... venkat


Re: Broken Love (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 05:09:53 AM AEST
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Dreams never die..they just fade..with a little TLC they can be brought back.Moving on is so hard to do..Im hearing you so clear on this.Excellent!


Re: Broken Love (User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 05:55:37 AM AEST
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Oh my! I feel this. I can definately relate. Thanks for sharing this. All the best.

Emma.


Re: Broken Love (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 07:16:24 PM AEST
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I felt exactly this way recently.. but only for a couple days. Long story. But more to the point, great write, and I hope you move on to something better.

~ Moonlit


Re: Broken Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 08:50:49 AM AEST
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But life doesn't end there! Keep hoping. Keep dreaming. Dreams are what keeps the soul alive.
Take care.
David




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