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I’ll change the world
I’ve got my gun
my hate’s unfurled

Murder’s angels
Cold blue steel
One trigger pull
To spin the wheel

I’m the dealer
it’s my table
Like I’m your Cain
And you’re my Abel

so Raise the stakes
And drop the ball
The time has come
To take the fall

the killer comes
with hell to raise
fate’s roulette spins
our numbered days

from underfoot
to standing tall
the one you crushed
is now your god
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Death Dealer

Contributed by undeadsuperstar on Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 01:29:24 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I’ve had enough
I’ll change the world
I’ve got my gun
my hate’s unfurled

Murder’s angels
Cold blue steel
One trigger pull
To spin the wheel

I’m the dealer
it’s my table
Like I’m your Cain
And you’re my Abel

so Raise the stakes
And drop the ball
The time has come
To take the fall

the killer comes
with hell to raise
fate’s roulette spins
our numbered days

from underfoot
to standing tall
the one you crushed
is now your god

Copyright Â© undeadsuperstar ... [ 2003-10-15 01:29:24]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Death Dealer (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 02:06:39 AM AEST
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Awesome poem..... very dark....love it!

Re: Death Dealer (User Rating: 1 )
by garyh on Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 02:07:07 AM AEST
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cool write with nice rhythm... keep up the work i like the story ;)

Re: Death Dealer (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 03:01:18 AM AEST
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oooh..I like this :)
"I’m the dealer
it’s my table
Like I’m your Cain
And you’re my Abel"
Excellent!!!

Re: Death Dealer (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 11:23:18 AM AEST
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so very dark.....i love this!!!!!!!!

Re: Death Dealer (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 03:33:56 PM AEST
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I liked the rhythm and the beat to this poem. Very nice not to dark but thats ok.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Death Dealer (User Rating: 1 )
by eternityandaday4u on Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 01:22:51 PM AEST
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wow very nice!!! i love it it was awesome. you have major talent. keep up the good work keep em coming!

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