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My Pain
Contributed by
jetlai
on
Tuesday, 14th October 2003 @ 04:25:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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My sorrow grows ever so deeper My thoughts grows ever so darker My sadness devours me My anger envelops me My own faith has deserted me My own self has killed me
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jetlai
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2003-10-14 04:25:24] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: My Pain
(User Rating: 1 ) by hope on
Tuesday, 14th October 2003 @ 12:41:50 PM AEST (User
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very powerful..you expressed your feelings very well in only six lines. great job!
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