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You were my lifesource, the key to my soul
I was besotted. I was in Love.
But you grew tired of fighting and love wasn't enough

To save us from ourselves and our stupidity
I was blinded by Love, I couldn't see
We were falling apart before my very eyes
We couldn't forget the hurt and the lies

You said it was over, you said we were through
I couldn't accept it, I didn't believe you
You wanted to be 'friends', you were sweet and kind
I thought that in time I could change your mind

I could make you realise, make you see
How much I loved you, how we were meant to be
And so I rang you every night
Waiting for you to tell me we'd be alright

Instead I heard the words I thought i'd never hear you say
The words that caused my heart to wither and decay
The words that left my spirit crushed and sore...

'I don't love you anymore' [comments] => 8 [counter] => 195 [topic] => 32 [informant] => symptom_recital [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
The Five Little Words That Destroyed My World

Contributed by symptom_recital on Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 02:38:57 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



You were my everything, you made me whole
You were my lifesource, the key to my soul
I was besotted. I was in Love.
But you grew tired of fighting and love wasn't enough

To save us from ourselves and our stupidity
I was blinded by Love, I couldn't see
We were falling apart before my very eyes
We couldn't forget the hurt and the lies

You said it was over, you said we were through
I couldn't accept it, I didn't believe you
You wanted to be 'friends', you were sweet and kind
I thought that in time I could change your mind

I could make you realise, make you see
How much I loved you, how we were meant to be
And so I rang you every night
Waiting for you to tell me we'd be alright

Instead I heard the words I thought i'd never hear you say
The words that caused my heart to wither and decay
The words that left my spirit crushed and sore...

'I don't love you anymore'




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Re: The Five Little Words That Destroyed My World (User Rating: 1 )
by Philipa on Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 03:03:14 PM AEST
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Oh those ones that fail are so hard to forget. Thanks for sharing.

Philipa


Re: The Five Little Words That Destroyed My World (User Rating: 1 )
by hope on Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 03:54:14 PM AEST
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Awesome write..I loved this, I think we all have been their.


Re: The Five Little Words That Destroyed My World (User Rating: 1 )
by Chanti on Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 04:25:50 PM AEST
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Beautiful write... aww its so sad too...


Re: The Five Little Words That Destroyed My World (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 06:07:14 PM AEST
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Well written....always so sad when this happens...
welcome to ypdc...
Jenni


Re: The Five Little Words That Destroyed My World (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 06:48:19 PM AEST
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Very well written ... I'm so sorry though :(( Jan


Re: The Five Little Words That Destroyed My World (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 07:32:03 PM AEST
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Truly well written, deep and so full or sorrow.

Thanks for sharing.


Re: The Five Little Words That Destroyed My World (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 08:20:09 PM AEST
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i've heard it and i've said it.......it hurts both ways.........great write!!!


Re: The Five Little Words That Destroyed My World (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 06:10:28 AM AEST
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Dear Symptom,
Welcome to Ypdc We are so glad you joined us!
What a sad write indeed! but always remember that doesn't mean you are not loveable, and it doesn't mean that someone else can't love you!
Great Poem...very well written
lovingcritters
Connie Sue




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