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my first impression of you.
Spending money so free
you looked straite at me.

Maybe you thought me weak
as I silently speak.
You said I might be the one
I should of turned-n-run!

Trying for six years to break
my soul to steal-n-take!
You tried to make a
play ground on my mind, hey!

My mind was streached long ago
but you'll not have my soul!
See that doen't belong to me
'cause in-luv I'm tottaly free!

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PLAYGROUND ON MY MIND

Contributed by emystar on Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 10:25:46 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Tall, handsome, well that's true
my first impression of you.
Spending money so free
you looked straite at me.

Maybe you thought me weak
as I silently speak.
You said I might be the one
I should of turned-n-run!

Trying for six years to break
my soul to steal-n-take!
You tried to make a
play ground on my mind, hey!

My mind was streached long ago
but you'll not have my soul!
See that doen't belong to me
'cause in-luv I'm tottaly free!

Copyright © emystar ... [ 2003-10-10 22:25:46]
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Re: PLAYGROUND ON MY MIND (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 10:35:31 PM AEST
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I'm so glad that he is now your EX. Men like that, err let me not start. Good write.

Nawtee

Re: PLAYGROUND ON MY MIND (User Rating: 1 )
by trippendicular on Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 10:58:48 PM AEST
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Great poem. I'm glad you're not with him anymore

Re: PLAYGROUND ON MY MIND (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 02:42:02 AM AEST
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dearest emy, well, im glad your away from him, geez! his loss not yours! no one has the right to be a phychic vampyre, this is so happy and upbeat, im happy for you, big hugs n' love nessa

Re: PLAYGROUND ON MY MIND (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 03:00:23 AM AEST
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I'm so glad to read this, grrlfriend...he didn't deserve you....
Hugs
Jenni

Re: PLAYGROUND ON MY MIND (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 03:31:54 AM AEST
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you're totally free...that's good..well written. venkat

Re: PLAYGROUND ON MY MIND (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 06:06:43 AM AEST
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believe in yourself and stand strong...good write
Shari

Re: PLAYGROUND ON MY MIND (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 08:44:15 PM AEST
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no one need that, so glad your good. Crow

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